|Reviews for First Come Love, Then Come Marriage|
| Apocalypse owner chapter 11 . 10/22/2013
awe i loved the story!
| patsgig2114 chapter 11 . 3/11/2013
I just want u to know tht I ABSOLUTELY LOVED this story! These kinds of stories where I get to see Sams jealousy and regret first hand are my absolute favorite, and I Iove the fact tht it didnt end being all corney where they are best friends or something...I hope tht u will write another and we get to see Sams, Emilys, and Bellas pov on their happy lives with children and friends. And I always hope tht in those stories there is a way for Quil, Seth, and Embry to find love but still live forever with Jake and Leah. Unrealistic..? Absolutely, but u can always hope ;-)
| Ash chapter 8 . 2/14/2013
My absolute favourite chapter! Thank you!
| mewlingquimlover chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
This is really a great story , I love how you reversed the roles between Jacob and Leah and sex of Bella's child. The whole idea/plot is utterly amazing ... and the fact your telling the whole thing so far through Emily, Sam and now Bellas point of view is outstanding.
i love your author " i hate bella " rant ... another anti - bella fandom sister!... love it ...
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 11 . 4/17/2012
Great story, still don't like Sam, Emily, or Bella, but it was fun to see Jake and Leah through someone else's eyes. I would love to read this story in Blackwater's POV, though I know I won't laugh as much, lol.
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 7 . 4/17/2012
I really do dislike Bella Swan!
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 2 . 4/17/2012
I really do dislike Emily.
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Love it! Love it! Now Sam can see how Leah felt, watching him and Emily. To bad you missed out loser, she's moved on to big and better things, lol.
| ShanLashay90 chapter 7 . 3/8/2012
I soo love this...bella sam and emily's real selfs
| ABarbieStory chapter 11 . 2/6/2012
i really enjoyed this story
| Rachel H xx chapter 11 . 1/10/2012
Sorry if im repeating this from the pm just i forget what i wrote sorry.
I deffinitly do like this story, but can you put the pov in please.
Okay im repeating myself?
Anyway il be back x
| nakala chapter 11 . 12/19/2011
i really loved this ending although i am not fond of emily in any way this kinds of leads her towards redemption, however, she is still horrible for not telling sam about leah breaking the imprint just her overall nasty woe is me attitude i do like all the irony in her situation and all that great story and i loved that it was from sam and emily's pov
| nakala chapter 4 . 12/17/2011
this story is so sick i love the crap out of this and i love how you have characterized emily only a person like this would do to leah what she did
and i knew as soon as she knew that leah had broken the imprint she was NOT going to tell sam that she did cus she's too afraid of loosing sam she just sucks
sam sam sam poor boy she's gone and she's a stronger woman than you ever thought she was because she has realized that she is in control of her destiny even if she has to fight for it happiness belongs to those who seek for it and even if jacob leaves her she doesn't have and imprint and is free to find love whereever it may come from.
great story so great
| hilja chapter 11 . 7/20/2011
So today has been read all Kei's updates day, and it has ben so much fun!
First of all, congrats on finishing this fic! This has been a joy to read. There's something so appealing with Sam and Emily angst in a Blackwater fic, that I always get a kick from reading that!
I laughed so much at Emily's selfcentered thoughts and childish blaming of Leah, but am glad she finally started to see reason and now there's hope for Emily to grow as a person too.
I look frward to the Blackwater kid-fic so much! Can't wait for it.
| ellie82 chapter 11 . 7/7/2011
Great story and nice job bringing it to a close.