I cry toowhat Claire feels and her mental fear got to me. she's awfully scared of her own emotional burst and confusion. poor girl

I cry toowhat Claire feels and her mental fear got to me. she's awfully scared of her own emotional burst and confusion. poor girl

I cry toowhat Claire feels and her mental fear got to me. she's awfully scared of her own emotional burst and confusion. poor girl

the first chapter is beautiful ಥ_ಥ

love it!

Hi - just read ur story. Loved it! You had my attention completely. is that really the end or do u plan any more? either way - TY! will check out what else u've written.

I really enjoyed reading this story. Update soon please. :)

I love gentlemanly Sylar/Gabriel being with Claire.

Oh wow I so would have reviewed the previous chapters but I just kept on reading and couldn't seem to stop. You are amazing! You've got real awesome story weaving skills here! I'm so excited for the next chapter! :D

Oh wow I'm so glad I ventured over here to this story. I'm hooked already! You are brilliant! Dun dun dun!

This is the most amazing Sylaire fic I have read so far. Only one other one can come kinda close. Thanks for writing it!

all those editors and you spelled SYDNEY wrong! :P lol Australians will be offended! (lol) not really, just thought i'd point it out though :) love this story, so real.

great story!

please update soon!

Please keep writing and update more soon! I don't want to guilt trip you into writing, but it would bring a smile to my face if I got an email in my inbox saying there was a new chapter! I really am enjoying the setup, and I guess I like that Sylar is still sometimes an ass. I don't really know how deep his feelings for Claire go, although he thinks he loves her. Really, love is a choice, it's about self-sacrifice, so it was interesting to see Claire's dream at the beginning and how she reacted. Aside from a typo on my hometown (Sydney), another great chapter! :P

I just read four chapters of pretense for... that? It was good, I admit, but... not worth all of that build up. Somehow that one measly sex scene only made me care less about the story.

(But then again- I suppose that's my bias; I strongly prefer the predatory, hungry killer that I expected to ravage her.)

And hey- I'm sorry. Don't think I'm horny, I'm just telling the truth... You know as well as I do that this is smut- plot or not. That doesn't mean it isn't a nice story, you know? But when I read smut, I expect... smut. So I'm sorry that I misinterpreted your fic.

But yeah, it deserves a good job either way. (_) And it's just my feedback; it don't mean nothin'. ;) -NeedleKirby-chan 3

"The second time she woke it was to her clock radio going off. She stretched and allowed the music to play for a little bit; that song "I Got You Babe"."

Groundhog day ftw :)

You are a more than decent pen, and given my recent and sudden obsession with the Sylar/Claire pairing... you are one of my favourite people in the world right now!