Reviews for The Last Potter in England
Azjerban chapter 5 . 12/21/2014
Pretty good.
I'll admit to skimming the middle chapters; Harry's life got a bit wish-fullfilment-y, what with the Elves handwaving Voldemort away, Harry's practically unlimited fortune, inexplicably powerful magic, double Animagus form... but I digress.
Once Hermione caught up to the lad, the story picked up again quite nicely. You had a few rough patches with stiff dialogue, but in the end this story gives a fine sense of closure to the important part of Harry's life.
That being, of course, who he ends up marrying (and how happy they are together). Quite satisfying.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 5 . 11/25/2014
pretty cool fic!

keep writing awesome (_)
missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 10/17/2014
Nice story. I've never really understood why Dumbledore insisted that Harry had to be trapped in England until he determined that the time was right to fight Voldemort. I would have high-tailed it out of there to parts unknown. Harry would have been much safer elsewhere, until he felt ready for the confrontation. Unless, of course, it had nothing to do with Harry's safety and everything to do with Dumbledore's manipulations. He certainly didn't use those years to train Harry or truly keep him safe.

I to also found the idea that Harry would have some trust issues to overcome with Hermione very realistic. Her behavior sixth year (especially toward Harry) was ... well, it was just very un-Hermione-ish. Ron's behavior with Lavender was just dumb, and Hermione's responses to him seemed more like desperation and just not wanting to be alone than love. With them so preoccupied, it's easy to see that Harry misinterpreted her feelings.

I've always believed Ginny was using Amortentia with Harry, based on his emotional responses WHEN SHE WAS NEAR. That relationship just didn't seem realistic. There was no real "anchor" for it, IMO. I don't consider hero worship an anchor. While Luna seems a bit cerebral and "airy-fairy" for Harry's more earthbound and sometimes harsh life, I still think she and Harry seem to have a stronger connection than Harry and Ginny. JM2K.

Anyway, nice read.
MSgt SilverDollar chapter 5 . 9/26/2014
Great story, I can picture Harry fainting at Hermione's news.
whitebuffalowmn chapter 5 . 9/2/2014
good story! thank you for you and thank you for the sharing with others.
theaceoffire chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
. Huh.

So the conflict of emotions is "I love you but I have been distancing myself due to shock" and "I love you but I am distancing myself to give you what you apparently want."

_ This story is like totally low conflict. Nice though.
lexus4444 chapter 5 . 7/9/2014
Not a bad story thanks for putting up your ideas.
XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 5 . 6/27/2014
Brilliant and cute story. Well done :)
Noble Korhedron chapter 5 . 2/6/2014
Cute AND interesting. Congratulations sir! ;-P
agnar chapter 5 . 1/4/2014
I think my only real concern/problem is Ron being his best man still, and Ginny being a bridesmaid.

Now I'm not saying they should be in jail or out of their lives entirely, but come on! Ron outright lied to both of them, keeping them from maybe getting together years ago, that is not the behavior of any close friend I'd want, teen or not. And thinking its ok to dose someone with potions, not friend behavior either.

No, I don't think I'd want either of those two assholes in the wedding. Any other Weasley, Neville or Luna, Remus, Dobby... Just not a Ron who kept them apart purposely and a Ginny who used potions.
StupidChinaBook chapter 5 . 12/17/2013
I think i read a story once where Dorea Black was actually James's grandmother not Harry 's.
strivengoddess chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
the reasoning in regards to hermione forgetting about non-magical means of communication, just does not ring true at all. I mean if she wasn't grout up in the normal world or with a magical parent it would be conceivable, however, she was not and both parents are rumered to be relatively intelligent people
so I would think it would be more likely that she was told not to use non-magical means as well as magical to contact harry, then just magical. Either way it still left many loop holes for her to get around... I just think it would be more likely someone like ron would forget about the mail or phones etc... but someone that has parents that use them as well as the internet everyday and you are reared with it it would be like being asked to forget your native language or how to breath.
Osmodious chapter 5 . 10/19/2013
Very nice little story...almost wish it had been novel-length. Thanks for posting!
ak chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
bonne fic!
BruceTN chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
"My sister came up from Green Bay to visit and I got sick for a few days."

Hmmm. Were the two events related?
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