Reviews for White Lies
SereneMayhem chapter 21 . 9/10/2012
This story is bloody awesome! Seriously. The amount of super-cute-adorable Draco/Harry and Neville/Blaise moments ;) and the action is amazing! Please update soon, because I HAVE to know what happens next! Something tells me it's not Bridgewood, because of that paragraph about him being annoying... But I might not be right. :)
Guest chapter 16 . 9/4/2012
Aww so cute 3
Alfirin-Lover chapter 21 . 9/2/2012
Why no update?
faiasei93 chapter 21 . 9/1/2012
I know you probably get these messages every day, but I really would like to ask you: When is the next chapter coming up?

Greetings, Faia
Crimson Daraku Shita Tenshii chapter 21 . 8/31/2012
I LOVE IT! Please keep up the awesome work!
pinkteacups chapter 21 . 8/25/2012
"'Why don't we all eat first and worry later?'" Wow, my life's moral. hahaa;D please please please update this soon! And I know, you probably get bored of all the reviews, for you get so many, but still, if you don't update soon, I will actually hunt you down and kill you. :))
Guest chapter 12 . 8/19/2012
"We may have a traitor in our midst."

Oh, really? Really? I honestly couldn't have guessed. I never saw that coming. I'm beyond shocked right now, trust me.

-Sarcasm Over-

This is a really great story so far :D I'm glad I decided to read it, even though I don't normally read In-Progress stories.

The plot is interesting to where you don't lose interest, but not so complicated that you finally just say to yourself, "I have no idea what the fuck is going on" and leave the story.

Banter between Harry and Draco is perfection. The probably my favorite thing about this pairing, so I get disappointed when people don't write it well (not that I blame them. I'm rubbish at writing banter myself). You, however, succeed in this area greatly.

I'm loving your OC - Morgan - too, though I normally don't have a taste of OCs. He's just so fun and carefree and, c'mon, he's Irish. Who doesn't love a good Irish lad?

As for your other OC, she peaks my curiosity. It could be nothing (Snape does tend to dislike people for no reasons sometimes... Okay, a lot), but still. I wonder where her character will go in this story. *is too lazy to go back and make sure I get her name correct, so, to clarify, I'm talking about the Transfiguration professor*

I think everyone else is written well, too. Pansy seems a bit OOC to me, but hey, we don't get much insight into her character in the actual books, now do we? Anyway, she's not skipping in fields after butterflies, so it doesn't overly bother me.

I also really like how you honor Madame Pomfrey a lot. Too many FanFictions just toss her aside, which annoys the living daylights out of me. I mean, really? I imagine her and Harry would have some sort of connection after all his days spent in the Hospital Wing! Plus, she does so much... Ah, I just love her character.

Okay, I'm going to end my review here, since it's of decent length and I believe I've said all I wanted to. (Two minutes later I'm going to remember something I wanted to say. It always happens.)

Keep up the marvelous writing and I'll go back to reading this fantastic story now. c:
N-A-Coma chapter 21 . 8/18/2012
I LUV THIS! Please hurry & post i need i can't wait for sum ACTION between both couples! :)
silverblondhairedlover chapter 21 . 8/10/2012
This story is really fun to read! I love it!
now, i really curious who has been trapping Harry and Neville. At first, I thought it was that Greengrass girl. But maybe not her.. hmm..
anyway, so far so very good! I hope you will update soon! Keep up the good work!
mommyflaw chapter 21 . 8/8/2012
Oh my goodness. I never start a story that isn't already completed but I am so glad I read this one. I love the plot, i love the twists and I love the characters. So believable and the way you use your words is just incredible.
Paineverlasting chapter 21 . 8/6/2012
No no no! Why is there not more?! there needs to be more! I've spent two days reading this damn thing!
This was awesome and slightly heart breaking and OHMIGOD what a weird way to get the power and I almost hope it NEVER ends, this gift because I could see Malfoy using it to be a politician- that would be funny as hell, but I'm hoping the story ends a bit before that mind you because that would simply be to long...

and this is brilliant. I hope and indeed cannot WAIT to read more. UPDATE SOON!
T.V programs rule chapter 21 . 8/2/2012
Next Chapter please! Love this story. Love how Malfoy is still Malfoy but somehow manages to be sweet at the same time! I love sweet Malfoy lol xxx
Rufescent chapter 21 . 7/30/2012
Yay! This story is just great! Your use of foreshadowing is wonderful.

As for the other perpetrator, I still think it's also Bridgewood. Probably because Snape's impression of her wasn't too great and Snape, with all that spy background, should be able to pick up details. Eh, okay, so it's possible it's not her, but I'm going to stay suspicious.

Again, great story and chapter! I'm cheering on Neville and Blaise, Draco and Harry are already moving on at a good pace in their relationship. And, of course, I'm cheering on you. Update when you can - which'll hopefully be soon!

Have an amazing week!
RockAndAHardPlace chapter 21 . 7/28/2012
So cute! Please update soon! I love the Neville and Blaise side story btw. :)
godess bubbles chapter 21 . 7/25/2012
Awesome story!
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