Reviews for Second To None
Shino159 chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
love it! i think mona is a nice character
CutieHeartless chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
I absolutely love this story, you did such a good job on it.
Dragi chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
hehe i liked this one shot. it was funny and cute and i love assasin fanfics if u write more cloud leon assasin fics u got to tell me i wanna read them :)
PyroKitty24 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
This story was so funny! I loved the witty comments placed randomly throughout the story. The only bad things I have to say about it is that it could have been proofread, and that it was out of character. But of course, how can you write a story like this and not be out of character?

The idea was amazing, and I loved Mona. You made her seem like she fit into this perfectly, and gave her enough character to be loved and/or hated. I couldn't figure out which i felt about her ; )

I would love to see a sequal to this, if you get the chance
frosty-the-radiator chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Wow! This story was absolutely wonderful and I loved it!

The idea itself is interesting. I can easily say I've never read a fic where Cloud is a bodyguard and Leon is an assassin, so that made it even better.

I also liked the way you wrote them. The banter was funny and their interactions were amazing.

Congratulations on writing such a fabulous story!