Reviews for Cake Crumbs
Dianna1965 chapter 19 . 12/11/2015
I enjoyed this story. I was sorry to see it end.
wayouttamyleague chapter 14 . 3/29/2014
montgomery dancing...great image
wayouttamyleague chapter 10 . 3/29/2014
goldfish faces and fizzing white static :) nice.
wayouttamyleague chapter 9 . 3/29/2014
Lovely little characters. Of course Castle gets his hair cut in a real barber shop, what a mensch!
wayouttamyleague chapter 8 . 3/24/2014
I like Jenny mouthy! Makes her more real and likable (as much as anyone can "like" the person keeping Ryan/Dever somewhat monogamous).
wayouttamyleague chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Lots of laughs in this one.

Waiter, bring us two Wassup-Wasabi Bloody Mary's, please!
wayouttamyleague chapter 6 . 3/24/2014
More Martha! Not enough of her on the show.
wayouttamyleague chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Cute, making Ryan's father the vegetarian ;)

Metro Espo is funny. "Bite it, Castle" is funny.

But when did Castle get promoted to being allowed to call him "Javi" ? Ooo does that mean they get a slash scene after the wedding? Hilarious image.
wayouttamyleague chapter 4 . 3/24/2014
L.O.V.E. Lanie.

"oh she's available" I can here the double entrendre dig and see the raised eyebrows.
wayouttamyleague chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
I love when Martha uses the words "grand gesture" in a sentence, I can see her hands spreading to illustrate in my head.

Trying to imagine what beer pairs nicely with Cacciatore? If you know please post.
wayouttamyleague chapter 2 . 3/24/2014
"good-surprise-happy-time yelling" - totally Beckett. good call. I love when she isn't "perfect!"

loved the image of Espo swallowing his bullets
wayouttamyleague chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
"as though follicle tension would help her concentrate" nice. Works for me too!
nikkievox chapter 19 . 4/18/2012
all i can say is WOW u mnailed them, love this story think i will have to have a read of your other storys now ;o)
Starfleetbrat chapter 19 . 2/26/2012
Really great story. I liked the party Castle threw for Ryan and Jenny, Martha was hilarious too. And I loved the intimate moments With Castle and Beckett.
JustAFan chapter 18 . 1/10/2012
This will sound mean but i thought bad news before good news, right?

Rick - Short for Richard

Rich - Lots of money

sorry but i had too, don't take it to heart

Other than that, I absolutely loved it :D

Keep on Writing

Just_A_Fan
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