Reviews for Newborn
TwilightLovarr chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Wow, this was amazingly beautiful! I loved this! The last sentence almost made me cry:

"One knew that if the other were to die, that the remaining one would have no choice but to follow in their footsteps and cease to exist as well."

So touching. Thank you for writing this.
ShamelessFlames chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
It seems kind of... undramatic. Other than that, your grammar's pretty good and I like the idea.