Reviews for The Stars That Aren't There Anymore
ilovevocaloid93 chapter 2 . 1/2
Rin is older than Len because she was created first. No exceptions. Research about Vocaloids before writing any fanfics about them.
Created by Oreo chapter 3 . 10/28/2016
Like it, but it ends suddendly! PLZ ADD MORE
Blitz.Magister chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
I'd really like to see where this is going! And I love your writing style it's practically perfect!
HanamiKaze chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Nice story you have there
aira2889 chapter 3 . 6/18/2011
"You may call me BEEEEPPPP!"

what the f- its actually funny!its like his name is something bad!though its actually just the alarm clock! XD


"Ah~ Why are you on top of me?"

at that time...she's still sleeping...what did 'beeeppp'*pfft* do to her?gahh!must...not...think...bad...thoughts...

ok~bye bye!
Oneoftheseven chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
Awwww dog len! I love this please continue!
Miko A. Kimura chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
Aww! Puppy Len! D

You have to continue! You have to or I might just DIE!
zombiecake11290 chapter 3 . 12/14/2010
UPDATE please! i love this its so awsome and lol len is so cute keep up with the good work :D
Maianh chapter 3 . 11/21/2010
lol hahaha XD "Must not think bad thoughts"!So funny! XD
nekos4lifeandever chapter 3 . 10/24/2010
yay! cookies! 3

anyway- this is a really cute story! please update soon!
BronyBerry0 chapter 3 . 10/11/2010
ChipTheGit chapter 3 . 10/7/2010


haha just kidinggg...

Well ANYWAY, good story and I think (for the next chapter) They might get robbed or attacked or somethin?
Ghost-Drive chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
no oh no not those bleeping cencors! XD Whoawhoawhoa! X3 And... TOWELS GALORE. BEWARE WHEN YOU'RE CHANGING AND YOU SEE A LIZARD ON YOUR WALL, GIRLS. It might just be a human disguised as an animal going all over you.
Irini chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
That definately something different than what I normally read. But I like it! I'm really curious about Len especially... I hope you update soon!
Aquatwin chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
Ha, fave part :"Must...not...think...bad...thoughts" Really, teehee, must say it: len, you dog ;D (worlds cornyest pun ever)

I'm believin' that the title is from gemini, I might be wrong, but it is about stars after all...

I'm so confused! what is going on? (i remember reading htis way back, but I sort of ignored re-reading the prolouge and first chapter, so I mightjust be asking pointless questions ;)

I must add this to my alert. Can't wait for an update (and I wonder if len will ever return to human)

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