Reviews for What If?
jitzu chapter 4 . 1/2
has your muse came back? please a new chapt soon!
The Padawan453 chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
Continue! Sooooooo good!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
I like it but it could use some finishing.
imnotraven16 chapter 4 . 6/17/2012
great story
bekyg620 chapter 4 . 2/19/2012
I love the idea that obi-wan could go back and change things! I really hope you decide to finish this!
SonjaSemeleCorvinus chapter 4 . 11/5/2011
never thought of this pairing before. it's a nice start
Sanosuke Hidane chapter 4 . 9/10/2011
How interesting this story is At first I was a little hesitant to read because of the POV, but I was sucked into the idea of Obi Wan going back in time. Its an interesting concept, and I enjoyed the chapter of Obi Wan talking with The Force.

I look forward to your future updates!

-Sano

P.S (and don't worry, I am patient. -)
Zarra Rous chapter 4 . 9/4/2011
This is a wonderful story. Keep up the great work.
WerewolfDoctor chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
I only just found this story but I love it! Please update soon.
RKF22 chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
great story so far keep up the great work
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 4 . 7/18/2011
excellent chapter, please continue soon! This fic is too good to be abandoned!
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
excellent stuff!
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
great stuff!

wonder how many people would immediately take the chance to re-do their life...
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I love the going-back-in-time-to-redo-things fics. really starting to like this one even though I'm not a fan of the you-perspective. Great to see more Obidala fics, I don't think I've found a fandom more filled with abandoned fics than Star Wars Obidala. :(
Daniella Harwood chapter 4 . 7/18/2011
You're back! Excellent. A lovely update, swept me straight back into the thick of things. I hope Obi-Wan can change the future. Now keep going, please.
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