Reviews for The Definition of Family
supergirl3684 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
that was such a GREAT begining! If I were Harry I'd be more afraid of Snape being calm and collected...and with that I'm gonna go hide now! Can't wait for more!
librarywitch chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Happy Happy Joy Joy! You are continuing with this storyline! Loved it.
Lily.the.flower chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
loved it!
MysticSong1978 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Like the start of the sequel very much! :-)
jimmy-barnes-13 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Fantastic start with this lovely long chapter! I am loving this sequel already :)
mischabren chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Hah, LOVED the beginning of this sequel! I can't wait to see what happens next, and what poor Harry will have to endure as punishment for his little adventure. So cute how you're developing the relationship between Snape and Harry, I love seeing them together. Will be interesting to see how they keep it secret from everyone. Great job, can't wait for more!
Discontinued.Fics.NeverReturn chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Lol, looks like my stalking has paid off! A great start to the sequel. The moo-ing hat was made of awesome. XD And I loved the fact that all Harry had to do was sneeze and chaos followed. Epic win! Hope for more soon, b/c I'm greedy. *bows*
gracesnape chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Very nice! I love this series :)
Pygmy Puff of Doom chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
My first review for the sequel! YEAH! CELEBRATION!

Ok. Now that the personal party is over time to get onto the actual reviewing.

YEAH! Happiness. Anyways, as I mentioned earlier, I think you've incorporated enough of the other characters to show that it isn't just Snape and Elliot (coz that is an awsome name). And I love the interaction between them. There was one that really stuck out. Trying to remember what it was. I'll try to think of it. The part about Draco was hilarious. OH! Yes, i remember which line it was.

"I'm afraid it's worse than that." Snape drawled, looking pained. "I've taken a leave of my senses and adopted him."

Well, I loved all of it really and am cutting this review off now before I rambled about nothing.

AchillesMonkey chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Yay! You're back! I am so excited to read the rest of this story! I loved the Malfoy boggart scene. That was great! I'm really excited that little Elliot will be back in this story. I really like little Elliot. Will Harry eventually tell Ron and Hermione about the adoption or will Hermione figure it out? Thanks so much for writing! I am so happy you're writing this and cannot wait to read more!
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