|Reviews for Scarlet Scroll|
| Parallaxm chapter 11 . 2/15
This is a powerful piece of work... The world-building is phenomenal. Physical combat seems to be the only danger involved in the canon verse, but you don't turn a blind eye to the darker possibilities of a kunoichi's "duty" (read: abuse). The gender polarization was an interesting and very believable concept, considering the patriarchal domination throughout history. There are moments when I'm reading this fic that I flinch, cringe, and feel wretchedly angry about character/general circumstances- your writing is engaging in the most suspenseful, intensive sense. I was surprised at your approach to Kakashi and Sakura's relationship- surprised because of how realistically paced it was, and how difficult you made it for them to express themselves- great writing; equally great heartaches on the reader's part. This Sakura is incredibly tough, but also self-destructive, though you can't really blame her (because honestly, it's probably smarter to steel yourself and risk losing happiness rather than repeating past vulnerabilities and risk losing competence). Kakashi's tenderness in his hesitation and loyalty is... well, beautiful, and it's more love than lust, which implies a stronger bond anyway. Prostituting Sakura seems to be a common thread in the fandom for whatever reason, but you've set a serious tone and laid out the consequences in a no-nonsense fashion. Thank you for that.
| Loki'dWendy chapter 11 . 1/27
Omg, I'm crying. Pretty please update? I love the plot and characterization and EVERYTHING. I'll be waiting like a creeper. :)
| silverpandora chapter 11 . 1/25
Why do you keep dropping all these awesome stories? It breaks my depraved heart /3
| Sula 74 chapter 11 . 1/1
I made a New Year's Eve wish about this story. I can't tell you exactly what it is because then it won't come true, but I have every faith that it will happen. :)
| Kumy chapter 11 . 12/28/2013
Your readers deserve closure. Whether you're taking an extremely extended hiatus or whether you've just given up on this fandom, your readers deserve to know. I'm not gonna resort to insults, I'm not gonna plead with you or treathen suicide if you don't update in the near future, but I will say this - it is only fair and a show of respect to your fans for you to inform us of what you intend to do with your unfinished stories. It only takes 5 minutes of your time to drop a couple of lines in your profile, it's the least you could do. Thank for your time. (if you are even reading this.)
| KeganHorse chapter 11 . 12/11/2013
I hope someday soon that you will return to finish this story. I have read all the ones you have finished, and I will not be satisfied until I can finish this one as well. Your writing is fantastic, as I am sure you know, and this story deserves an ending.
| Stardust413 chapter 11 . 12/4/2013
Wow! I finished this story in one day and am so addicted to your writing! Thank you so much for giving us such captivating stories, I just pray that you will continue to do so. Since you haven't updated in over a year, I was wondering if you were planning to do a sequel if this story is finished? I'd definitely recommend it, and your fans would be so grateful to see what becomes of Sakura and Kakashi in this universe. ;)
| e chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
| FaSun chapter 11 . 10/20/2013
You HAVE GOT TO finish this story. It's so good I can hardly stop reading it! You have me on edge and I must know how it ends. My made-up scenarios are nothing compared to what you come up with. I need a real ending, please!
And as always, your writing and imagination are superb!
| DreamCatcher.01 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Please come back! It's been a year or two since I read The Girl from Whirlpool and visited FanFiction. Yesterday, out of the blue, I remembered your story and came back to your page hoping to find an update :( So, I started reading this amazing story, Scarlet Scroll, which has also not been updated for over a year. I can only hope you have not updated because you are enjoying a happy life with things occupying your time that are more fulfilling than creating these wonderful and skillfully told stories. All the best to you, but here's to hoping the writing bug gives you a gentle but noticeable nip in the very near future :)
One Fan of Many (aka DreamCatcher.01)
| theneurotransmitter chapter 8 . 8/17/2013
Wow, you've really made me cry. Just wow. This was so tough, but so well-written. My heart just breaks for Sakura.
| theneurotransmitter chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
I've loved some of your other stories but had never really given this one a shot. I think I read the first chapter and was afraid it was another story sexualizing Sakura through skeezy means. But I see now it's not. You really treat her situation the way it is: dismal and truly about rape. Thank you for treating that seriously. I like your Kakashi as well.
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/2/2013
Plz update it cause i cant wait
The whole story is just exciting especially when kakashi has a girlfriend but then with everything hes done with sakura he feels weird OMG love
| BethZ chapter 11 . 7/28/2013
Wow man. Why have you got to be so perfect at this whole writing thing. This story makes me feel emotions. /emotions/. Like 5 different ones, and that's a lot of emotions, I'd say.
I have no constructive criticism other than your minuscule errors, but they are easily skimmed over and not something you should dwell on.
Thank you for your stories, this is the second of yours I've read, but definitely not the last. I'll probably spend my summer just reading all your work. I sound like I'm a forty year old man but I'm not. Don't get that image in your head, it's difficult to get rid of. FYI.
Wow tho man.
| Kakurichi chapter 11 . 7/25/2013
Omg, I love this story, great plo