Reviews for Scarlet Scroll
Mary 18 sons chapter 11 . 8/27
And now I reached the end. I guess if I wish really hard I can pretend this is the actual end? It'd be much kinder, I think. And speaking of kindness, this story is a lot darker than I thought it would be. House of Crows is nothing but a little angst hissy fit compared to this story, like damn. And let's not even talk about Duty Before Honor or The Window (cause I read all of those, aha. Can you tell I'm a fan of yours yet?)

If you ever get around to updating I'll definitely read it to the end. Great job, seriously.
RE To Anonymous chapter 11 . 8/26
RE: To Anonymous posted on August 12th. It's a shame that us writers can't flag your comment. I want to post a reply to your awful comment, because people like yourself are one of the reasons behind why individuals don't want to share their passion for writing, in fear of being overly criticized.

Everyone starts somewhere. Silvershine's writing is incredible, and I absolutely love what she writes and chooses to share with us, but I doubt if she were back on again to continue where she left off, that she would appreciate someone putting another individual down in her reviews section. There's a difference between being honest but polite about not liking someone's idea, opposed to putting them down.

I don't have a problem with someone thinking/working out how the story would potentially end. We get so vested in an individual's writing, story-telling and character building, that it's hard not to imagine how it would end, when a story we love has been put on the back burner.
THAT Guest chapter 11 . 8/12
PS I can post ten more reviews like this one but I don't want to spam you.

I hope your life is going well and that you may find some inspiration to come back to this amazing story.

Please take your time, but do not give up hope!

It is truly beautiful with the setting, characterizations, and entire feel of the story.

Please bless the universe with more of your amazingness.

Love you and your writing so much,
That Guest
IM BACK chapter 1 . 8/12
UPDATE PLEASE
Introducing the new and improved version of THAT GUEST
*drumroll please*
DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN

*We love you Sari!*

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To Anonymous chapter 11 . 8/12
You put a lot of work into writing your own imagination of the ending so thank you for that.

I just wanted to say that it is a good thing this story is Silvershine's because the ending you wrote is pretty dumb. Silvershine's stories are very intricate and that silly ending you wrote is just lame.

Its not good at all.

I would rather have the story unfinished than with a pathetic ending like yours..
Girness chapter 11 . 5/1
This story is amazing. I hope one day you will update. It's driving me nuts because I really want to know how kakashi and Sakura start developing feelings for each other! Hope all is well :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15
Ah. Well, this is going to be interesting...
Guest chapter 11 . 4/5
Hello! I know its been sooooo long since your last actualization , but please! Preatty please end the atory it was so goog and intriguing! And Kakashi its so freaking awesome :)
No account chapter 11 . 2/19
By the way, when I write my own ending, I want to do it properly. From her previous fics, we can see that Silvershine doesn't write something without a reason. And there are quite a few things in this fic that are yet to be explained. One thing that bugs me is Sai. His investigation on Black Market, his sketch of Kimiko and Kakashi kissing, his sketch of Sakura's sorrow. Sai, Naruto, Sasuke and Yamato all might have been intended to appear again at some crucial points of the story. Therefore, when I write I want every mystery to be solved. If there is anything you think is notable for the story please write in the reviews here so that I can take down my notes. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
Hey Anonymous-chan, I really like the ending you wrote, but I suggest that you go and check chapter 6 of Spring Rain and Winter Storms by Silvershine. It is kind of an epilogue to this story. And they don't have a son, they have a daughter named Hana. She is terrible at music -suggesting that she didn't take her 'father' Hiroshi's ability to control sound. She looks like Sakura except for her eyes. Kakashi comments that Hana has her father's eyes.
Since Hana is the subject #5, Sakura receives money from Danzo's program/mission; but Sakura isn't comfortable with the money she is getting. She thinks she is commiting a kind of "fraud" as her child doesn't develop the intended abilities. Kakashi reassures Sakura that she deserves money as much as any other women who went to Scarlet Scroll mission and conceived a child with intended abilities.
Sad thing is that Hana doesn't seem to like Kakashi at all because he always tests her and makes rude comments about how bad her abilities are.

Also, that chapter doesn't give us any clue about what happened to Kakashi's relationship with Kimiko - the blond woman Kakashi likes.

As Silvershine left the story on chapter 11, we don't know whether if there is a good ending or not. However, the oneshot "Fraud" shows that nothing good happened.

I feel so bitter about the ending of 11th chapter. Thisbis the last paragraph she wrote:
"'"Good bye, Kakashi." They settled on a awkward wave and went their separate ways. He would return to Kimiko, no doubt, who would remain ignorant that her lover was an expecting father, and Sakura would return to her empty apartment and figure out how she was supposed to cope with this new mother-shaped hole in her life.'

TBC"

O really don't want Kakashi to end up with Kimiko, and Sakura to suffer so much.

I am planning to write my own ending for this story too. Not anytime soon, but I really want to write an ending to it. I don't even have a fanfiction account, but I will sign up to the site when I start writing. However, I'm not sure if I'm allowed to write an ending for another person's fanfic. Is it wrong to want to write fanfic to a fanfic?
Since Silvershine is such a nice person, I don't think she'll mind but I'll try to get her permission. :)
munchiedi chapter 11 . 2/19
Nicely done, Anon-chan!

I think that your vision of ending is sound and could be 'True Ending' for this piece. Thank you very much for sharing this.

And also thank you, SilverShine-san for writing this piece albeit unfinished but this a proof of the momentum that once upon a time you love KakaSaku so much to share this wonderful piece. Like this is the final frontier to this pairing before surrendering to the wind that whispers a different tune that follows the fickle mind of its creator. Still... thank you! *kowtows*
Anonymous chapter 11 . 2/15
I just want to say first that I love this fic! I know you'll never update again, so for some sense of piece of mind, I'm going to attempt to write an ending for this story, even if just for me.

Danzou decides to leave Sakura's mother alone. Sakura tells Ino she's pregnant and that the father is some random man she met on her mission. Ino doesn't believe her, but doesn't press the issue. Sakura re-unites with many of her old friends, including Hinata, Sai, Tenten, Lee, Neji, and Shikamaru. They support her through her pregnancy, and Sakura gives birth to a healthy baby boy. Danzou is very pleased to see it's a boy. He tells Kakashi he would have sent Sakura on another mission if she had birthed a daughter, deeming women unfit to train as ninja anymore. The baby boy is born bald, with Sakura's eyes, but the face of his father. No one suspects the child to be Kakashi's as so few have seen his face.

In a small wooden house about a weeks journey from the village, Naruto runs into Sakura's mother during his travels. She welcomes him in with open arms, and tells him why she is so far from home. Tenzou didn't tell her the specifics of the mission, but Sakura's mom tells Naruto that she was raped on a mission and that Sakura is pregnant. She also tells him that she believes Kakashi to be the father, but that he didn't rape her. Naruto, enraged by what happened to Sakura and how bad things have become at the village, sets off to Suna to tell Gaara that their plan to take down Danzou needed to be executed ahead of schedule. After a heated debate between Naruto and Gaara, it was finally agreed that the plan would take place in a month. Naruto rushed to inform the other allies they had in the rest of the hidden villages.

3 months after the birth of her son, Sakura is in her new living room holding her son. His white hair is beginning to grow in. For now, it can be passed of as blonde, but she doesn't know how long before Danzou will become suspicious of the baby, for it looks so much like Kakashi. An ANBU agent slips in through her bedroom window. He approaches her in the living room, and removes his mask, revealing Naruto. He expresses so much guilt for not getting to her sooner when Kakashi had called for him so many months ago. Sakura reassures him it isn't his fault. She honestly loves the child. Knowing that the child would not be a monster like Hiroshi gave her hope. Kakashi was a good man, who had looked after her as best he could. She knew she could raise her son to be a good man like that, and would protect him from the evils Danzou wanted to put him though.

Naruto asks if it's true that the child is Kakashi's. Sakura is unable to answer due to the binding curse. She explains this to him, and Naruto decides he'll ask Kakashi instead. Before he leaves, he tells Sakura there is an attack planned for the next day to bring down Danzou. Naruto leaves to inform his other friends in the village, so they can prepare. Sakura rushes to Kakashi, knowing she needs to fight for the village. She asks him if there's anyone he trusts to look after their son. Kakashi does, and takes him from her. Sakura heads to Ino's house to prepare for the next day's battle. Kakashi takes his son to Kimiko, and tells her of the impending battle tomorrow. He insists that she take the boy and flee the village, telling her that he needs both of them to be safe. Kimiko, who has seen Kakashi's face, notices the resemblance between them. She confronts him on why this child is so important to him. He tells her the truth, that it's his son. The binding curse prevents him from telling her about the mission, but he tell's her Sakura can explain things once the battle is over. Kimiko agrees to take the child and run, but is cold towards Kakashi for his lies. Naruto shows up not long after, to tell him about the attack. He confronts Kakashi about the child, who admits it's true. He tells Naruto what he told Kimiko, that he's have to hear what happened during the mission from Sakura. Naruto again apologizes, claiming to be a failure of a ninja for never being able to help any of his teammates. Kakashi tell's him he did the best he could, and that he's going to save the village tomorrow. Naruto leaves still feeling guilty.

The battle wages for hours the next day, and many lives are lost. Sakura is able to kill Jin and Ari, telling Jin he finally got what he deserves. Most of the Danzou loyalists are killed, while any remaining flee the village. Eventually, Naruto is able to defeat Danzou after cutting his way through the many ANBU agents standing between them. He and the others mourn the loss of Neji, Iruka, Kiba, and Chouji. Naruto is appointed as Hokage and immediately sets to work reversing the damage Danzou has done to the village.

Kimiko returns to the village, and gives Kakashi back his son. She's heartbroken over what has happened, and ends their relationship. Kakashi let's her go, knowing he'd never be able to love her properly after all he's been through. Sakura tends to the wounded at the hospital over the next few days, as Kakashi watches over their son. When she is finally able to come get him, Kakashi tells her he wants to be there for them both. Sakura initially refuses, believing Kakashi to only being doing this out of guilt. Over several months, Kakashi is able to show Sakura he is serious. After 2 years, they move in together, to make it easier to care for their son. They stay in separate rooms, but eventually seek out each other more and more for company. Their relationship grows, and Sakura is able to let go of the horrible past she's suffered. Sakura has their second child, a daughter, when their son is 5 years old. Naruto becomes the most beloved Hokage the village has ever had, bringing the most prosperous times of peace there has ever been between all the hidden villages. He marries Hinata, and they have children together. For once, the newest generation of ninja know nothing of war.
No account chapter 1 . 2/8
Silvershine's explanation on tumblr:
Anonymous asked:
Question! Why did you leave the Naruto fandom and stop writing those perfect KakaSaku's?

Perfect? Oh stop it you~
I think I was in the Naruto fandom for many years, and well, I was still growing up and changing and after writing about 3 quizzilion fics, I think I ran out of stories to tell in that world. The manga was beginning to drag on a bit, I was getting disillusioned with the kind of people inhabiting narutoforums where I was a mod, and then real life things began happening that took my attention away entirely.
I think it’s inevitable that it would happen. I usually move from fandom to fandom as new interests catch me. I did spend some time a few months ago catching up on the manga once it had finished. At this point I have no idea if its over or not, but I think once canon basically confirmed sasusaku (which I expected and love, tbh) it also kinda hammered the nails into my kakasaku coffin, since I always prefer writing canon, and any canon kakasaku fics at that point would have to deal with the fact that Sakura is grown (married?) and has a family with someone else. It could be done, but I think I wrote enough fics while the time was right. XD
No account chapter 1 . 2/8
For the people who wonder if she is ever going to finish this fic, this is her answer on tumblr:
Anonymous asked:
Any chance Scarlet Scroll will be continued?

Probably not in all honesty. I lost my outline plans many moons ago, and reread that fic recently and could only vaguely remember how it was supposed to end.
I am so, so sorry.
Let’s say it just it ended happily with scenes like this.
FreeDomsHope chapter 11 . 1/30
Oh my...I knew this story hasn't been updated in ages but I still took the risk reading it. I haven't read KakaSaku for so long. I didn't know what to expect from this story but I was enraptured by it since chapter one. I don't regret reading this story. Hopefully one of these days, you'll continue off where you left off. Thanks for sharing!
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