|Reviews for Night of Passion|
| Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 1/3
| Penis chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
| Hawkflight7 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Aw! Vanille was so cute at the end XD "not that tent"
Good lemon too, lots of foreplay so nice.
| Malorey Wolf chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
"i don't want to sleep in that tent anymore" LOL THAT WAS FRIGGIN HILORIUS!
| Whiffles chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
This was awesome! Although it's kind of difficult to read with more than one person talking in the same paragraph (it's confusing because it makes me think it's the same person) and a few grammatical errors, but you have a great way with words and describing things. This was super hot xD And the end was funny too, made me laugh :)
| anon chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
its funny with all these m storys that snow and fang are the more shall we say peverted ones here.
| Sinnclaire chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
That was totally LOL-worthy!
Fang knows a lot of things, doesn't she? XD
And she's merely educating Hope on the ways of the world. LMAO.
Great story ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Sequel sequel sequel!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Make another chapter
| Dorian Windslasher chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
It's ooc, has quite a few spelling errors and lacks general quality.
Plus, you have to remember the fact that Hope is what? 15?
Wheras Lightning's 21.
This has to be an issue if you are to be realistic. Both for the sex itself and for what leads up to it.
Light can't be all too happy with herself.
| TGTDarkGunner23 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
i though the story was awesome the ending was funny i felt bad for vanille though but you need to add to it like back at the Gapra Whitewood or when they get alone i have ideas if you PM me
| SeddieDestiny chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
that had everything... young hope(hard to find)... a lusty light(even harder to find)... and dreams that described their love for one another... i lovedddddd that... and the reactions were grade-A... PERFECT... brava brava bellisima brava
| LyricAiLove chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Vanille is so funny. "I don't want to sleep in that tent anymore."
Hope and Lightning: A truly interesting pair.
| Kitty-Kat chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
WooHoo Hope and Lightning got what they want!
Amazing story!I really liked it.
5 stars out of 5 :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
they were in together naked surely that was inevitable