Reviews for Attack
Mi Yool chapter 3 . 6/7/2010
I like this so far, but WHY OH WHY is all of the dialogue in bold? It hurts my eyes. Plus, extended pauses are three consecutive periods, not two. :I

Keep writing, but for the love of Raptor Jesus stop writing the dialogue all in bold lettering.
Chitanda chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
I can feel my heart shattering. Oh, Alfred!
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
I'mma little curious. what's gonna happen?