Reviews for Will of Fire, Heart of Rock
Crystalzap chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
Aww all the lil kids of Iwa love him now... the Yondaime's son XD

love the story, and hope you continue! :D
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 5 . 5/12/2011
Gogyo, not gogio.

Gogio makes me think of gigolo.
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
Youki is demon energy. Youkai is a demon itself. Please don't mix them up.
bakapervert chapter 6 . 8/28/2010
Update soon please.
bakapervert chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
Sasuke is in for a big shock in the fight.
bakapervert chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
Can't wait for the confrontation.
bakapervert chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
Hopefully you can skip quite a bit, NAruto's training is interesting and all, but nothing beat the fun stuff where he start kicking ass and leaving gaping spectator in his wake.
bakapervert chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
Itachi is pretty cool. *squeee*
bakapervert chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Looking good.
Dezzal chapter 6 . 7/31/2010
awesome story so far,i look forward to the next chapter
Carumati chapter 6 . 7/24/2010
I love where this story is going!
VanillaIce1 chapter 6 . 7/21/2010
very cool... initially i was excited to see naruto training by himself to become a formidable ninja on his own after 3 years, but with han's help its even better.

it seemns that something you implied from last chapter was that tsunade and jiraya were up to something... besides ordering him back to the village.

maybe when iruka gets back, and is given the good news that naruto is still alive, the three of them could send a care package to him of ramen, justu, and ramen.


ps i loved the "yes mother" comment a few chapters back
VanillaIce1 chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
good call on adding han

hes pretty much open slate as a character since not a lot is known about him...
Moon Pix chapter 3 . 7/16/2010
So, are you saying that a person who can do a Rasengan one handed has the chackra control of an academy student? That's pathetic. Water-walking is said to be a jounin skill, which means that it enables you to use techniques jounin normaly do. Which means techniques which can go to A-rank (obviously this isn't linear, I'm talking in general here). You're seeing it all wrong. If Naruto's control is as bad as you say... than he can't be able to do those control exercises. Thoses exercises are concrete, to be able to do them, you have to be able to control your chakra sufficiently. And by being able to do them it means you have the control to do the jutsu with the same level of control required (there's other factors like elemental affinity, necessary amount of chakra obviously...). What you're saying is completely inconsistent. It doesn't mean that he has the same level as Sakura for example, just because he completed the same exercise as her. It means though that he has reached a certain patamar regardless of his amount of chakra. (it would be stupid if one can complete an exercise with, say, B-rank level of deficulty regarding chakra control, but then say that he has the chakra control of a D-rank level ninja). Also, Naruto has a great amount of chakra, but not anything so out of the ordinary, except when he uses the fox obviously (Kakashi says Naruto has about four times his own, and he isn't a powerhouse in that field). Both Jiraiya, Pain, Kisame have great amounts for example. Raikage was said to have bijuu level as well...

Finaly there's no such thing as too much chakra to perform a jutsu (so many say that Naruto can't perform bunshin due to that). I don't know were people get that from. There's a thing as too little skill, now that's true. Naruto has control issues due to his great amount of chakra, and because of that he coudn't perform a bunshin. But his control was so horrible because of his lack of skill as well, and his reserves only amounted to the problem. I don't see why he can't acquire the necessary level of control to do it. I'm sure tree climbing is more that enough to be able to perform E-Rank jutsu. Naruto just wasn't able before because he was so bad at controling his chakra. Of course, why would he use bunshin? it doesn't serve him much, that doesn't mean the he can't do it still.
Flying Raijin chapter 3 . 7/16/2010
just to point out: Jiraiya is a Sennin, and a Sannin. Both Tsunade and Orochimaru are Sannin (part of the "Densetsu no Sannin" menaing Legendary Three Ninja and that's why they're called Sannin). Being a Sennin (Sage) Is not the same thing. So far we've heard of the Gama Sennin (Jiraiya) and The Rikudou Sennnin (Sage of Six Paths). Even before this Sage Mode thing, Jiraiya was the only one who was called sage and it made sense, since he was known to do a lot of travelling (and is inspired in a japanese sage Jiraiya btw (from mythology or maybe a true person... that I don't know)) You refered to Tsunade as Sennin in this chapter and Orochimaru as Snake Sage in the previous chapter.
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