Reviews for Okaeri, Oniichan
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
so hot...i would love to watch this
anita.hyuga chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
First lemon? Really? Wooowww.
I'll fav this no doubt.
MlleShadow chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Really nice job, being your first lemon!
Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
you... you DID IT! ya finded the way tu turn the byakugan intro a sex weapon! XP it was a really good fic i love it good work
Ichigo chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
you should continue making fanfics like this. nice read. ;) bet a lot of people faved this story. hehe.
onetime chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
cool. love your work, do keep it up.
Windy chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Ey good story! Way to go for your first time! Hehehe!
Sadinne chapter 1 . 7/26/2010

The lemon was cool, I liked it :)

But, I there was a lot of expressions and scenes from the fic "Your Smile" chapter 10.

I don't know if it's you who copied it or the author of "Your Smile"..anyways '

Good luck :p

notimportant chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I loved it. It was very tastful, you should turn it into a two shot where they end up having to get married.
Doll-Airi chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
ow that was hawt ! bravo kudos to you!

*.* luved it! favd.
Alexis S chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Alexis S chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Baka hime chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
N0t bad
Demoness-MarlstonWells69ner chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Wow. That was awesome. Hot.


Planning to do another one-shot or something?
Pablo hirunata chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Wow... I love this story _b