Reviews for Raw and Rosy
lilytree chapter 19 . 5/3/2012
This story is seriously amazing. So much sex but all of it interesting and exciting never redundant or predictable. Also great story and characters. As much as I would love to read more, way to quit while you're ahead. Thank you so much, I've read a lot of fanfic and this is easily one of the best. Also did I mention, SO HOT!
lilytree chapter 9 . 5/3/2012
Holy shit this story is hot! Totally amazing, thank you!
ludicrousLemon chapter 11 . 4/22/2012
Oh my god, this is so fucking hilarious. I didn't know what a flogger looked like so I googled it, and there was a picture of Robert Patterson in Edward form holding one!
canadac chapter 10 . 4/5/2012
I loved your story and the amount of lemons were exactly in line with the characters. Their relationship was initially based strickly on sex and gratification, so it only makes sense that that is the majority of their activities. I also loved the fact that you proof read and have your work beta'ed so well. It's nice to read a story without feeling like a teacher in grammer school doing corrections.
FARISWHEEL chapter 19 . 3/24/2012
I love this story. It's my favorite Jasper/Edward fic, and definitely my favorite spank fic. Really enjoyed it.
Kimihearts chapter 19 . 3/18/2012
This was so hot!
cbzoo chapter 19 . 3/14/2012
a really great story, I have totally enjoyed the read
cbzoo chapter 8 . 3/13/2012
I never can guess what you come up with next
cbzoo chapter 6 . 3/13/2012
I love this story I can so relate to Edward
cbzoo chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
wow got me all tingly
simba5waldo5 chapter 19 . 3/8/2012
I am so sad this has ended. But at least there ia r&r revisited. This has been fabulous to read. Hope u dont follow perfectly persuasive and stop writing. U 2 ladies are a hoot and I enjoy reading your stories. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 18 . 3/8/2012
Aw. They are so sweet together. I am so glad that jasper drove ed to the airport. I like how in their own way they care about each other. Great job. Melissa
KKitten chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
I am speach less! I didn't think this would be a turn on, but Damn!
simba5waldo5 chapter 17 . 3/8/2012
I hope they become more rhan friends I think ed has fallen for jasper, but wont let jasper know. great job. Lived it. O think u need to write anothet cj or story on these boys. Plz?
simba5waldo5 chapter 16 . 3/8/2012
damn that was hot. Loved yjhat alice fpigured them out and jasper confronted ed. Poor ed and his wacko parents. Love ur 2 boys. This story is majorly hot. Wish u would do a future take story of these boys when they are a little older. If they did this in high school, I could only imagine what it would be like at 22. Great job. Melissa
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