Reviews for Raw and Rosy
simba5waldo5 chapter 10 . 3/6/2012
I have seen both videos, and I love the one with the song by violet winters. can't find it anymore though. this story is so amazing. I love that they are starting to move past some of the problems with each other. I really hope that they can stay together in the future. now that would be something worth reading. a sequal for these 2 boys in the future. then they could really get into the bdsm swing of things. see what your story does to me? my imagination goes all a story. Love, love, love it. melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 9 . 3/6/2012
I love angst. when jasper and edward fight, but I have to have a happy ending. It was good this happened to the boys. I like how they are starting to care for one another, though jasper would never admit it. Loved the sex. Like I said, I can't believe I get turned on by 2 gay men, but damn are they hot together. I also like how jasper feels they are partners in their sexcapades, that edward has a say in what activities they do. great job. Love this story. same question,different ch, are you planning on writing another ch? you are so talented and such a great writer, and I hope you have a few more ch in you. melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 8 . 3/6/2012
That was great. Love how his mom didnt say anything. Just left the room. I am glad jasper cares for edward. If not, all of this would just be wrong. Awesome story. Love it. Great job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 7 . 3/6/2012
Loved this ch. Very hot. Ur boys are a

wesome together. They are starting to like each other. Grear job. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 5 . 3/5/2012
Glad edwaed made the choice to stay with jasper and cont thier time together. Love tis story. U are so talented and very funny. Could we maybe get another ch? Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 3 . 3/5/2012
Damn that was hot. Love these 2 boys together. Great job. Any thought of doing another ch? Love ur writing. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
These 2 are so hot. Love how jasper has an attitude, is funy, byt is caring at the same time. S far as 80% sex, these are teenage boys. What else is to be expected. Oe u do anotr outtake. I love these boys, and I am sure everyone else does too. Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
I cant believe I never reviewed. Hands down this has got to be one of yhe best stories out there in ff lAnd. I love that ed likes to b spanked and jasper likes tp spank him. Are u ever going to do another update o the boys? I would love to know what hapens with the boys in the future. I am rereading. Love this. Great
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 19 . 3/4/2012
hell yeah im pissed u ended this. its an awesome story! and hot! yummy! lol... anyways... ur story was recommended on /twi-porn-hall-of-fame/complete-twi-fics/

i was like, hell yeah... whats edwards secret!
Genuinlysherlocked chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
I rereading this. For the third time. It's just so good. GAHHH.
muppokat chapter 19 . 2/15/2012
I know it's been forever since you finished this story, but I still want to tell you how amazing I think it is. So... yeah. There you have it :)
Mell C chapter 19 . 2/8/2012
Enjoyed the story. And thought the ending was just right. People need different things from relationships- we aren't all identical romance-bots. Thanks for writing.
Stargazer1364 chapter 19 . 2/4/2012
Wow. I have to say that this is the best Spankfic I've ever read. Whew! I need to take a few cold showers, and I'm glad you actually went with a plot on this story despite the fact that you warned it wasn't one. :) I am smiling throughout this entire review, so you should know that. ;) Loved it!
IThinkINeededThat chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
Hot damn! I love this story. There seems to be an unfinished sentence in the middle of this chapter... I can't but wonder what you were trying to say!

""Does it hurt, Edward?" I asked, though it was obvious even a pain-whore like Edward" And that is when it goes to a new paragraph
Guest chapter 13 . 1/13/2012
Brilliant ! Useless coming from me but still your writing is brilliant ,)
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