Reviews for Raw and Rosy
cjstar01 chapter 19 . 7/7/2014
Oh no! It doesn't say end secen it says the end! *Tear*
I miss this story allready.
cjstar01 chapter 15 . 7/7/2014
Of course your prom king, everybody loves you.
I love this secen , allthough I think they should have kissed right in front of everyone.
cjstar01 chapter 10 . 5/29/2014
Realy Jasper? I stoped beliving it was a game when you guys decided to FUCK in the JANITOR'S CLOSET!
I'm done fighting with you,Jasper!
cjstar01 chapter 7 . 5/28/2014
oooooOOOO! We're halve way there!
Well Edward BI and Jaspers gay.
Ha ha, jaspers happy.
Let's say today is Friday, HAPPY GAY DAY!
cjstar01 chapter 2 . 5/28/2014
Just a random coment, why does the first sentence of every chapter has to exselate so fast?
Sluty Edward, now your just teasing!
Quote: then I raised my voice to it's more authoritative tone, "I wasn't kidding around when I said I was getting you a plug". He swallowed: end of quote. That moment when you think that Jaspers playing when he's not. ( Edward)
Flaming Rose chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I'm baaaaaaack!

1.) There were a few gramer mistakes and missing words, and some sceens needed to be drawn out a little more, like where Edward was "dying" to touch himself, like, make it a little more elborate please!

2.) I love this story!
rachel garber chapter 19 . 2/28/2014
yes, I do love the boys, love their story how they wnet from hating each other which I suspect was a coverup for their feelings for each other great story now onto the outtakes
rachel garber chapter 18 . 2/28/2014
There it is, I knew it, they have a connection that goes beyond their BDSM relationship go to it boys.
rachel garber chapter 17 . 2/28/2014
Worried aout what happens when Edward goes to England, I jast hope they will be able to maintain their relationship somehow seems to me as this plot line developed that these two belong together and I don't think they will be very happy being apart for very long. Hope you have something planned for them for the long run.
rachel garber chapter 15 . 2/28/2014
That was something; but the video was taken down by youtube for copyright infringement or some such nonsense
rachel garber chapter 14 . 2/28/2014
Yeah Jasper is starting to have feelings for Edward, he just doesn't want to admit it even to himself, btw I was unable to look at any of the postings on your page, have to try again not sure if it really was a prob with the page, or what.
rachel garber chapter 13 . 2/28/2014
Good for Jasper, but hell he wouldn't admit that he wanted to kiss Edward loved the interaction between them with the lost bet. that was priceless.
rachel garber chapter 12 . 2/28/2014
I got confused with the outtakes, I realize I need to read the outtakes alongwith the original otherwise I forget what was in the original, Carlise seems to have serious boundary issues, guess that is a way of asserting his dominance and probably a bit of voyeurism as well which may be fine in some instances but is just a bit sick in this one considering it's his own son. No wonder Edward is so fucked up. Good chapter, as I guessed they are falling in love with each other if I had to place a bet on future chapters.
Rachel Garber chapter 11 . 2/28/2014
I've really been enjoying this story and plna to start a facebook group that is strictly devoted to slash, I don't read a lot of BDSM and mostly what I have read so far has been M/F but I'd like to include the link to this when I set up the page. I like the way you are segueing from D/s to what appears to be a love relationship as well, umm just because I am a hopeless romantic, and I love me some boy on boy action, very hot story.
rachel garber chapter 10 . 2/28/2014
This kid is slow on the uptake, I knew it wasn't a game anymore a few chapters ago, he is falling in love with Edward, and he with Jasper, sorry it took you so long to catch up, smart ass. You care for him and he cares for you. Just that simple Nowhere does it same that BDSM partners can't be lovers too. Get over it.
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