Absolutely phenomenal story, also definitely go read the original ending!

I would have expected Hermione to fight back against the bullies instead of just letting them drown her. Where’s her bravery?

How I love bittersweet endings (though this can be seen as straight up sad for some, really.)
Thank you for sharing this and for keeping it posted. Probably one of the best stories with Tom Riddle as the MC out there.

Omg omg omg

This book was the perfect depiction of Tom Riddle, it captured his personality perfectly. Amazing job I definitely could not write a story like this at 16, bravo

Could you imagine dying and being stuck at school where you gotta share rooms for eternity, I’d die…. Again?

no! it was so good but i think that tom shoulda came back and it was a whoever did it to themselves first lives while the other self dies because it has to be balenced.

What a sad ending, defs not a hea but I still liked it. I like how Tom sacrificed what mattered most to him just for his love for hermione. The ultimate sacrifice, especially for him.

Damn. This made me feel so completely angry with Tom. I’m actually heartbroken. And the last sentence of this chapter were amazing but so sad.

Omg omg omg such a good chapter, I’m literally crying. I had to pace around my room bc I could not handle it when he gave her that love potion. I’m so mad, I would never forgive.

It was an okay story though I prefer the alternative ending.
One thing I don't understand though is that she learned all these cool things in the other world and then seemed to totally forget about them and never use them. Why the hell did she have to go through that then?

Tears…. this was beautiful and heart wrenching, and the ending was poetic

I HAD NO IDEA THEY WERE BOGGARTS! Yay! Neville is alive!

What a beautiful author’s note!

thanks for breaking my heart. I am gonna cry for an hour. then read the original ending and hope for the best.
speechwriter, another amazing story.
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