|Reviews for Longing|
| Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Interesting piece with some nice introspection. Keep up the good work!
| Katy chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
That was great! I really liked your sentence structure. It all flowed nicely and was simple yet effective. I saw everything you wanted me to see without getting bogged down in needless adjectives. And I really like the negative statements that were really his thoughts.