Reviews for Suspect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this marvelous story, which has become one of my favorite WC stories! This could have been an episode, these *are* Peter and Neal's voices throughout. Love Hughes' part also (I kind of have a weakness for Hughes). So well written, such a touching and true depiction of their relationship. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of work. |
![]() ![]() I so much enjoyed this story. It was excellently written (really, very well written), and the voices of Peter and Neal were very well done. I loved how Peter and Neal had similar thoughts about calling for backup when they were woken in the middle of the night. It's a nice, subtle example of that mind-mesh Peter describes. The crying/hurt/comfort/drama parts were also handled beautifully, and fit in very well with the characters (which isn't always the case in angsty fics!). Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() A more complete review will be submitted at the end- no fear!-, but I had to stop at the end of this chapter and say what a WONDERFUL job you've done with building the story and writing Hughes into it. It sits so perfectly! I absolutely love the end of this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Major tear-jerker, what a great story. I loved both the Peter and Neal focused chapters. Great job! |
![]() ![]() I really like your portrayal of Hughes here. The last two lines are my favorite. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. You really get the characters down pat, and your working style is great. Thanks :) |
![]() ![]() So sweet. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG very awesome story. I loved every piece of it. The characterisation was very good. This last chapter was so emotional. It so well showed the bond between Peter and Neal. Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, peter really came prepared for that hearing! he made it! neal's getting out of prison, wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what about the jail break? would peter do it for neal? i'm kinda inclined to believe that... |
![]() ![]() ![]() peter! i'm sooo glad he's been found and seems to be getting better! it's soo like him to worry about neal! hope he can help him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah, i do hope that too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor neal! right now i really don't like seaton at all! and what doesn't hughes tell? |
![]() ![]() ![]() peter? no, that can't be! and definitely not neal! |