Reviews for Every Little Fragment
HawthornSword chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Ooooo, this is lovely! :)
Ann Incorporated chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Wow, that's beautiful. Well... maybe not that. It's just so peoetic... but it IS a poem after all. I don't know, I'm really bad at writing reviews.

But honestly, this is amazing. The part about Tex was also very good. :)
Cortanas-7hrD-L0veR chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Great job. There are so few poems on this site its always nice to see new ones! :)

Good work
Martienne chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
I loved this up until I got to the last line. Something about it fell flat. But the descriptions of the AI, and of the way they hope that Tex can be joined to them, was so complex and heartbreaking (yet hopeful).
Needs Moar York chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
This is so much love. Seriously.

I have yet to see a RvB poem, and this one completely took my breath away- words and format say so much about the AI themselves; fragmented and scattered, but profound nonetheless. I especially loved the lines about Tex- I had never thought that the AI knew that Tex was one of them, too.

And yay, York/Carolina! :)

AColdAndBrokenHallelujah chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Oh my god, that was beautiful. You have talent. It flowed so nicely, each line fitting with the last. I believe you should do some more. :DD
UnnaturalKetchupTaco chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Very very good! Wow, I loved it. I can't write poetry to save my life, and you write rhyming poetry!