Reviews for Eyes
Cheile chapter 1 . 1/20
This is a pretty good look into Serena's head and this particular encounter with Stanton. Has the right amount of creepiness and intrigue that was shown in the books. My only complaint is that you didn't capitalize "Follower(s)"; this would help fandom blind people understand their importance to the canon as minions of the Atrox.
Robert M de la Torre chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
The story begins as if I were inside a person's diary, reading every move as it progresses to a point of an interesting meeting for the first time, a subject with desirable features. The opening is precise, letting you ventre into the rest, which, well is left up to the imagination.
Bringer Of Eternal Darkness chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Ha! I found it on my own! Anyway, awesome! Hurray for putting your first fic online! You definitely need to write more... preferably Yugioh though, but this was still great. Keep up the awesomeness!