|Reviews for He Broke Every Promise|
| Unknown Ghost chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
HE IMPRINTED ON HER SISTER?
its leah and emily all over again!
| Unknown Ghost chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
good first cahpter
| twi-nighter chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
Omg this is going to be crazy! There are soo many bad things that can happen because of this! Poor Seth... Poor lizzie!
| ooh chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Me is liking. I will keep my eye on you...
| FUZZYROASTBEEFORQOTD chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
This looks like it could be interesting... or it looks like it could be total crap because you could screw this up. I hope you do as good of a job on the rest of the story. I would hate to have to flame this.
Quote of the Day: "Death is hard. Living is harder."
| starrygalaxie chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Ooh... rash promises get you no where Seth! Way to be an idiot dude. Especially to your sister. That's cold.
| RONLOVESHERMIONE27 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
I love Seth, so I have a feeling that I am going to love this story. Please continue.
| thecivilunrest chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Personally I like stories that have several POV changes, like Jodi Picoult's books. Her books told in the first person narritive are awesome.
I saw a few times that this lapsed into third person, though. That's the only problem.
| fuzzy pencil chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
OMG this story is AHmazing! AMAZING! And it is only chapter one. OMG.
| SnapesYoungLove chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
GIRL! DO YOU KNOW HOW AWESOME OF A WRITER YOU ARE? That was an awesome beginning to an awesome story!
Only problem i saw was that you used the third person a few times even though i knew it was Sethy poohs pov
If you want ill help you with that?
I love you very much girl! keep up the great work!