Reviews for He Broke Every Promise
Unknown Ghost chapter 2 . 6/9/2010




its leah and emily all over again!

deja vu!
Unknown Ghost chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
good first cahpter
twi-nighter chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
Omg this is going to be crazy! There are soo many bad things that can happen because of this! Poor Seth... Poor lizzie!
ooh chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Me is liking. I will keep my eye on you...
FUZZYROASTBEEFORQOTD chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
This looks like it could be interesting... or it looks like it could be total crap because you could screw this up. I hope you do as good of a job on the rest of the story. I would hate to have to flame this.

Quote of the Day: "Death is hard. Living is harder."
starrygalaxie chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Ooh... rash promises get you no where Seth! Way to be an idiot dude. Especially to your sister. That's cold.
RONLOVESHERMIONE27 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
I love Seth, so I have a feeling that I am going to love this story. Please continue.
thecivilunrest chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Personally I like stories that have several POV changes, like Jodi Picoult's books. Her books told in the first person narritive are awesome.

I saw a few times that this lapsed into third person, though. That's the only problem.

Good luck!
fuzzy pencil chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
OMG this story is AHmazing! AMAZING! And it is only chapter one. OMG.
SnapesYoungLove chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
GIRL! DO YOU KNOW HOW AWESOME OF A WRITER YOU ARE? That was an awesome beginning to an awesome story!

Only problem i saw was that you used the third person a few times even though i knew it was Sethy poohs pov

If you want ill help you with that?

I love you very much girl! keep up the great work!

CME :)