|Reviews for The Not So Short Second Life of Bree Tanner|
| Cherie Deveraux chapter 13 . 2/25
Hi. Just got through reading the first 13 chapters and really liked it. I noticed it hasn't been updated in three years. That's too bad I would have liked to see what happened to bree and alec. Ill check out your other stories. You are a great writer.
| NoCoolNameHere chapter 13 . 2/22
Oh my god! Please tell me there's more? This has to be one of the evilest cliffhangers ever! This is a great story and I love Alic's little immature moments that completely make him like a regular teenaged boy it's so cute. And poor Bree just can't catch a brake bless her.
I really hope you do up date this at some point because it is a really great story xx : ) : )
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 13 . 2/19
This is such an amazing story! All the other stories I've found that are similar to this aren't nearly as well-written. I have to say that as soon as I saw the pairing I squeed like a little girl. I can see it now: Jane seems more sadistic than Alec (I can't imagine him evil for some reason), so once Bree finds this out for herself interesting things will happen. It's also good that they're similar ages; now we don't have to create awkward OCs to be his mate! I'll admit that I haven't read Bree's original story, but I don't intend to so I should be fine. ;)
Anyway, I hope you update this again. It has too much potential to just leave uncompleted.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
| iAnoved chapter 12 . 2/11
I love the dialogue between Bree and Alec that you've set up here. I love that they both make extremely valid points and that you can relate to both of them and their view points while understand why their argument further the other's view of their lifestyle.
I'm so tired of reading , in stories, arguments where only one side is thought through and validated and the other is obviously a filler.
This is just *muah* fantastic.
| Reader chapter 13 . 1/25
Your story is so good that even though you haven't updated in like five years I still come and check if its updated. I think this is such a great story and its a shame it isn't finished. :D
| NS chapter 1 . 1/21
Wish u would have continued. I wanted to see how much of a jealous rage Jane would be in when Alec brought in Bree. U haven't updated in so long so either your dead or u lost interest.
| xoBrandyxo123 chapter 13 . 1/10
Like..woah. Come on babe! You cant just leave us here hanging! This is like, one of the best fanfics I ever read. I read this like, two years ago, and i''m still waiting for that promised update... I really hope you come back to this. Like pleaseee. Oh and alecs POV story? LOVE IT!
| Dustfinger's cheering section chapter 13 . 12/31/2013
I like the story. A lot. I hope you update soon.
| PerseusAchillesTheseusJackson chapter 13 . 12/18/2013
I love Alec in this story! Good job :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Hey please write more
| fellanie.parris chapter 13 . 8/22/2013
Please update soon Alec comes to her rescue right or does he leave her behind ? Plz update plz plz plz
| lomy333 chapter 13 . 7/1/2013
I feel Bree's thirst now but instead of blood it's for more chapter of this amazing story 3
| lomy333 chapter 10 . 6/30/2013
WOHOOOOOO! :D Finally 3 I ADORE this
| lomy333 chapter 7 . 6/30/2013
Oooo hoo hooo :D This is getting intresting
| lomy333 chapter 6 . 6/30/2013
ALEC! 3 Can I say I LOVED their meeting?
Can I also say I beginning to compare your awesome talent with stephanie? Because honestly! You have a way of making your character's interactions and thoughts so appealing and interesting, I am never bored while reading this (Just like twilight, read it 50 times maybe?), you should consider developing you writing talent because it's not just about the vocab but it's about the story plot and let me tell you, you're one amazing storyteller
I think I am falling in love with this like I fell in love with twilight