Reviews for Time is the Fire |
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![]() ![]() Hello! I keep on forgetting half the comments I want to leave on your story. I hate that! HAHAHA it's what happens when I don't take note of every reaction you get out of me, and I only successfully type the last bits of emotional rage onto a review. Here I'll try to bring back everything I skipped out on. These are comments that I only remembered after pressing the post review button and FFN won't let me leave a review more than once! Ugh. Anyways! Omg the people I dragged as I tried to understand what was happening! Albus, Ron, Viktor. I'm all so sorry! And hey! Viktor's cameo, ish. Who taught Hermione how to kiss! LMAO it's just sobering how Harry thought of it. It's nice that in the middle of a war, he could still feel something as normal as jealousy even though Viktor is very far from them. Whatever happened to Harry's feelings for Ginny though? It's never mentioned, not even by Ron. Although yes, Harry broke up with her (I suppose?) before they left for the Hunt. I just hope Ginny wasn't waiting for him to get back and get back with /her/. They're all fighting a war, a physical one and an emotional one. I hope all four get out of the latter unscathed as possible... I'm so happy that Luna and Dean made an appearance! The movie didn't show Dean (? Right?) and I forgot about him being there in the books but hey! More friends. Since Harry is still /existing/, Harry the Master of Death, then that means his world, /that/ future, is still set to happen, right? So he'll vanish once he interferes with Time. What will happen to the Hallows then? Harry has his cloak, and the stone albeit still inside the snitch. But what about the wand? He /will/ sacrifice himself, wouldn't he? Hermione will see him. And that's okay, he wouldn't drive her insane but she'll start to question why he came back. What's ever worth going back to, to that place? Oh I hope I just really hope no one dies tonight! Except maybe Bellatrix and Lucius. I hate them. |
![]() ![]() The Harry from after the War! He's back, isn't he? Hermione. Harry probably got killed! And Hermione thought it was /Harry/! Yes? I'm right? Thanks for sparing me the scenes from the Hallows! When they went back to Godric's Hollow, and how they were chased through the woods by the Snatchers. I wonder what happenee up there! I hope Dobby won't die kskskskd |
![]() ![]() Oh come on now Harry! HAHAHA you have another wizard on your side. Surely that must be better than anything else. Ron will get around. Hmmm the next is the cup right? How on earth are you to find it without Hermione getting tortured by Bellatrix! Ughhh nasty scene about to come up smsksksk but this is just great! The sooner they get to Hogwarts the better! It will all be over soon |
![]() ![]() FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY BITCH YES BITTHCHJHHJJ YAAASSSSSS I'M SO FUCKING HAPPG THEY'VE FINALLY DOEN IT THEY'VE FINALYL BEEN HONEST THESE RASCALS I OUGHT TO PULL your HAIRs out your scalps! TEENAGERS! NOW GET ON WITH IT AND DESTROY ALL REMAINING HORCRUXES |
![]() ![]() MA'AM THE QUAFFLE LINE MA'AM! Oooh i bet hermione knew what she was saying! I BET! SKSMDMDMDMD HARRY YOU'RE ONLY HURTING HER MORE YOU DIMWIT ! BUT OKAY FINE NOBILITY AND ALL DAMN IT YOU BETTER DO SOMETHING GOOD AND RIGHT AND HELPFUL IN GODRIC'S HOLLOW YOU TWO! Idk what can happen there honestly, find Bathilda already dead? How can that help? See more of the hallows symbol? In the cemetery? What could possibly change there? |
![]() ![]() HARRY JAMES POTTER WHERE DO YOU THINK ARE YOU GOING ! OSKSMDKDSKKSK IS THIS THE DAY RON COMES BACK? WITH THE SWORD IN THE LAKE? IS THIS IT? WILL THEY FINALLY GET A MOVE ON WITH THE TASK? What's left to find hmm. The diadem, the cup. Nagini, Voldemort, and Harry. Destroyed: ring, diary, soon the locket. Okay, okay, only 2 now. Come on! |
![]() ![]() so it's all gone now? amazing! AMAZING! BRILLIANT! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW AMAZING YOU ARE! THIS! JO CAN NEVER! So can I take it that Harry will come back for the battle? He'll protect her. He'll get rid of Bellatrix? Yeah? Or he'll go to an even earlier time? Make it all easier for DH Harry and Hermione to search for the horcruxes? What would make it better? |
![]() ![]() the mirror of erised! oh god! ksjdghsdkjgshkjgs to where did dumbledore even hide it after that first year? i forgot now! but god! ginny, i want to hug her and take all the pain away! :( she deserves none of this. nearly a decade after reading the original series, i've finally come to realize how much she just loves harry. it's not even from the original works. it's here. to give up, more than 20 years of life with harry. just to save him. even if that means destroying the life they built with their children. it's so unfair. but also, it's something i would do without a doubt, harry james potter. i would have saved you at any cost, like how you did with hermione. run along now, hermione. you may love your family and you may try to persuade us all you want, but it will always be harry first. look at you now. trying to fix it all. do you actually think things will go the same? it will be okay now. it will be better. i'm just really sad for ron and ginny. this is a very tight spot. both weasleys. it's just so unfair for this to happen to siblings. i can't believe you're gonna kill james again. james potter, harry's dad, and james potter, harry's son. albus, too, will die again. albus dumbledore and albus potter. lily, will die again, like james. rose, hugo. why? right. for the boy who lived. he has to live, after all. |
![]() ![]() what? how could it be harry? i mean of course harry's the most powerful wizard and it could only be him but who told him that? kdhgskjhgskjdgsjk AAGHHHHHHHHH HARRY JAMES POTTER! i feel so bad for everyone. ginny and ron. oh! the weasleys! :( why is this all fucked up sdgjkhs it's just sad and it feels like no matter how deserving the two of them are, the world isn't just... it's no longer just them 3, you know? even if i included ginny, makes them 4, there are 5 children to think of now. all of them! what the hell is hermione up to? WILL SHE WANT TO DIE INSTEAD? oh. OH. OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! IT WON'T HAVE TO HAPPEN AGAIN! THEY GO BACK. AND HERMIONE STOPS HIM. AND THE BATTLE WILL GO AGAIN. RIGHT? OR EVEN BEFORE THAT. THEY WILL GO BACK TO THEIR PAST. AND DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN, AND VERY DIFFERENTLY TOO. YES? I AM RIGHT, RIGHT? SAY YES! HERMIONE WILL CONVINCE HIM! THEY'LL KNOW! THEY'LL BE TOGETHER! OH MY GOD TIME REALLY IS POWERFUL AND SCARY AND EVERYTHING THAT SHOULDN'T BE PLAYED WITH! YOU ARE BRILLIANT, DEAR WRITER! THAT, YOU ARE! |
![]() ![]() i feel so bad for thinking of ron! ajhgakjgahkjg well... this leaves us with viktor krum, right? oh god! OH GOD! POOR HARRY! GINNY :((((((( I FEEL SO SORRY FOR THE CHILDREN! HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN AFTER 19 YEARS! THEY DON'T DESERVE ANY OF THIS! HOW KSDJGHSDKJGHSDKJ HOW CDKJGHSDKJGSH I HATE IT HERE :((((( at first i thought it would be dumbledore but then,,, he;s already dead. and i don't thik he would go that far as manipulating harry. i hope not? ksjhgskjs but jesus christ! showing harry his children that could have been with hermione! when they already had children of their own with their respective partners? jesus christ |
![]() ![]() ginny... oh poor girl! what's she thinking? ginny, darling, as much as i didn't want you to end up with harry, you've been married for more than a decade (i suppose?), he's loved you for more than 2 decades. the memories could might only mean his friendship with hermione. i hope you don't assume so many bad things enough to destroy your bond with hermione. she is more than anything, your brother's wife and best friend too. although, what could that memory be? why would it be harry's worst? it's been so long since i read the series... prisoner of azkaban... i can't remember anything like this. it went perfectly! it's my favorite book, i think? why can't i remember anything! |
![]() ![]() why would anyone take that memory away from harry? it's about him and hermione...? and hermione's trying to find that moment, right? that's why she keeps on coming back to their moments together at hogwarts. but who? draco? who could possibly do this? it's someone still alive if hermione plans on doing something to him after she gets back from the task. but then, the last scene... harry's calling for ginny. well, that's just really... sdgkhskj |
![]() ![]() when they find out what's bothering harry, will that mean it's over for two marriages? what about the children? i feel like this will be some cultural reset or something. they can't move backward nor forward. this will be hella awkward ! FIVE CHILDREN ! TWO FAMILIES ! how in the world could there be any way to break that without being an entire monster ! |
![]() ![]() what's hermione doing? what ! the bloody hell is happening ! ooohhhh this is interesting! hopefully no one has to die! djkhgkds |
![]() ![]() right. good teeth. sure. what was the first scene about? |