brilliant start!

Best story ever

I love your story! Not only was it well written, but it has one of the most creative plot ideas I've read. I love the twisted timelines, and how it all ties up in the end. Thanks for a great read!

This story was so enjoyable and so much fun to read! It was beautifully written and definitely one of the best Harmony stories out there.
At first I was really hoping for the story to somehow return to the warped time from the beginning of the story where Harry would wake up and they would get a divorce and just move on with their lives finally with the one that they truly love.
But then again, I also really like how things changed and Harry and Hermione got to love each other like they were supposed to and still ended up together in the end and honestly that's a whole lot better than an emotionally damaged Harry, a guilty Hermione, and two messed up marriages with kids in between it all. So scrap what I was hoping for lol.
Thank you so much for writing this.

The suspense! This is so interesting! :)

I'm so excited to read this! I love how it takes place right where the books/movies ended. Great first chapter. :)

This fucking story. was absolutely everything. It made me cry and laugh and hold my breath. Superb. Had so much fun reading it.

That was brilliant!

Captures the intensity of feelings well, and does a good job of weaving the Harry/Hermione relationship into canon.

The premise, motivations and story plot however is lacking and just an excuse to get to the romance stuff. If thats want you like, go for it.

As a time travel exploration not very sophisticated and I had to cringe reading about the world travelled master of death harry, that was pure cheese.

Can recommend if you want to read some intense H/Hr shipping and are able to ignore the premise.

What the fuck? This is the premise?
Yeah, lets kill our 5 children instead of talking and maybe a divorce!

Completely reasonable (not!), especially since harry hasn't even woken up properly. If this seems reasonable to the Author, I don't want to get to know them personally.

After over a decade of reading Harry Potter fanfiction, there's only one way to sum up my reaction to this story.

Dis real good.

A wonderful take on the issues of time travel, clever plot and one of the best twists in a Harry Potter story since the Deathly Hallows made this story one of my favorites. Only thing I didn't particularly like was the lemons - I've never been toon keen using sex as a underliner of a relationship's gravitas, but at least they were handled in a graceful way without being too coarse. The Quidditch metaphors were, perhaps, a tad too much, though.

This was a nice story, reasonable well written, with a nice enough spin on cannon and time travel. There were some issues with characters actions and motivations, particularly alternate Harry and Hermione. The interaction they had was a bit odd and didn't seem to fit in quite right. Also there were some issues with how mysterious you were at the beginning, it seemed in parts to be contradictory as a result. Of course there is still that plot hole at the end where the first person does not travel back in time to fix things. That could have been explained better. Still an entertaining read and overall did a good job with the characters and their interactions.

Wow I’m impressed by how the angst is written in this. Like usually for Harmony fics the angst drags on and on but the make up/realization of love is too sudden and not worth the long suffering. But in this the explanation for both characters blindness towards each other and the confession scene is the best I’ve seen for Harmony.

Really amazing story.

Wonderful job , thanks for your time and work awesome story highly recommend it