Reviews for Time is the Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. The usage of Time-Turners is amazingly well thought out and shows a great deal of forethought from the author. I was absolutely astounded when the ending turned out differently - I had expected this story to end tragically, with both of them accepting death. The sacrificial protection was beautiful, and it bookends the whole canon series very well. The only (little) problem I might have is that in the actual canon, there's evidence that Hermione was very happy that Ginny matched with Harry - I think when H/G kissed for the first time, the book said something about "Hermione was beaming". So the whole "she was in love all along"/"jealous" thing is a bit of a stretch. Plus, Hermione never struck me as much of a head-over-heels romantic (Definitions of Romance by Elizabeth Culmer seemed more in-character). But overall this is fantastic. The twisting multiple timelines, Pettigrew's redemption, the bookending with the Mirror and with the sacrificial protection, the absence of Weasly/Dumbledore bashing, and even the recommended soundtrack. Thank you for the great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was confusing and sad and lovely and funny and everything! Thank you for the head spins! and for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's been ages since you've been on here and you may never see this review but with my utmost sincerity, all I can say is thank you. Thank you for a wonderful fic, the most perfect alternate to Deathly Hallows I've ever read. Thank you for reminding me of the true wonderful nature of the Harry/Hermione relationship. And thank you for reminding me to seek nothing else in my own life. This is truly the quintessential H/Hr fic. It boggles my mind that I don't see it recommended more because I don't think anything captures why so many of us feel so passionate about the ship. When I read the Harry Potter series to my kids one day, I may just have to use this as the seventh book instead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a beautiful story, well written, that fixed the atrocious epilogue and where all the angst still lead to a happy ending. I hope to read more of you if you ever decide to write something new. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy a good time travel story. This certainly qualifies. Thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() I love this story, wow |
![]() ![]() well I have to be honest, I enjoyed the angsty part, not so much this fluffy chapters recently :D will finish this story though, still like it |
![]() ![]() so now that future Hermione is really gone I have a feeling the ending was in plain site, where Hermione does die in the end :[ but it seems with all that angst you are making it up for with the good times Hermione had iwth Harry when he decided to tell her, great story. |
![]() ![]() brilliant story and I honestly have never bothered reading time travel stories cause they're usually corny as all hell, this is done great, epic story, masterpiece |
![]() ![]() Omg , this story , I haven't teared up reading a story in a while and this is just so real and very touching, JKR is brilliant at painting the world of Harry Potter, but this story of yours went beyond her writing, really the best i've had to read |
![]() ![]() So Harry obliviated himself to save Hermione's life, thats so sweet and so bloody typical of Harry, but who sent the dementors to him? love this story, its really angsty, but the best kind of angst I've ever read. |
![]() ![]() This story clicks everything into place for me, even though I've always been an H/Hr shipper, seeing Hermione go through every significant thing Harry has been through is awesome! without me knowing, its what I've always wanted to read in an HP fic, add in to the fact that you've compiled this with actual canon in regards to the epilogue, it really is an incredlbe read! As for the story itself, this is some Inception shit! with that said you are truly a brilliant writer! because most stories I read I believe are good, REALLY good, until they start becoming TOO cliche, you know what I'm talking about? (TOO MUCH H/HR, TOO MUCH FLUFF) but with your story, it has the cliches, yet it manages to bypass the stereotype by adding more angles to the story in ways that are believable..! Hermione HSOULD hate Harry for what he's done, but NO, Harry has his reasons and stays in character, thats what I love most about this story, the characters staying IN CHARACTER, this is really a gem, really :D |
![]() ![]() I love this story because if Hermione had seen the things Harry had done that nobody else had, she really would be in love with him, to add on to that, she should have fallen in love with him regardless! but its a shame JKR doesn't know romance for SHIT |
![]() ![]() I like to read this story listening to Coastal Brake by Tycho - |