A very good story, but way too much angst for my liking. You need to look seriously at several chapters for a mixup of sexes , not very often, but I had to reread the lines a couple of times to make sense of it.

Really great job with this. Enjoyed reading everything here. I liked how the story was basically the same, with just enough changed to make it seem a little different. I could have done without the whole ambiguous who wiped their minds nonsense but the story would have been much shorter without it so I can see why you did it I guess. I would rather have seen some changes in the names of the children. It would seem that neither Ginny nor Hermione had much say in the naming of the Potter brood. I especially hate the name Albus Severus as it always seemed a bit ridiculous to me. Overall, very well done.

So cute and funny :) Glad I read this again! Thanks!

P.S. Please hurry and post your SSxLE fic! I'm looking forward to seeing you do them justice too.

I've read a lot of fanfiction, HP in particular. I have a handful of fics - a small one - that are my tried and true favorites. But this fic? It has become my new canon. I truly feel it was written the way JK might have if she'd come to her realization about H/Hr sooner than she did. I don't know a higher compliment to give you than to say that to you. It has given me true resolution not only to this story, but the series itself. And the ending? Sheer perfection. Utterly marvelous, with real meaning and hope for them and their world. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us.

I LOVE this story (you should realised how much i mean the LOVE part by my capitalization.

Oh my God...what can i say...it's been so long since i read such a good story...i don't really read time travel stories much because sometimes they give me a headache but yours were extremely easy to follow...or your writing has been so good i ignor errors...i kid...really you're brilliant!

What i LOVE about it is it has no BASHING! Even though im a Harmony shipper and it's hard reading about them married because that would be cheating and it goes against my personal morals nd virtues especially when they have children but your story is just WOW...i don't know how you made it work...

BTW...I've never been good with Math but i LOVE how you incorporated a chapter about it...and i just adore you that the last opening verse came from the bible...hahaha...

Thank You for sharing! It took me years to find this story but im glad i did.

Too bad. This story seems to have turned into a carbon copy of DH. Of all the books to copy, I hate this one the most. Goodbye!

I tend to avoid angst fics, they are anathema to me when they are the cruel machinations of PTBs putting our intrepid heroes through the wringer. That said, I really like your work here. Your even handed treatment of the Weasley clan is a cool balm after my own horrified reaction the the epilogue, and you are one of the first to make me think that reading post hogwarts stuff might be fun (the years have lessened the sting of canon law). That being said, you also undid the epilogue, so I got to have my cake and eat it as well while reading this one. I thought the scene in the tent with the two time travellers was steamy and heartbreaking, which is a most confusing state. :D Thanks for this, much appreciated!

Your first paragraph is somewhat repetitive, and I don't believe that the invisibility cloak has any flaws in canon.

Brilliant story! Very well written, and I didn't guess any of the plot twists. The time-travelling scenes were brilliantly adapted. It's been a long time since I've found a story like this.

Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I was confused at the start but it I loved your original plot and how in character harry hermione and Ron were. I didn't guess the "dark" artifact but without a doubt, favourite bit of the story; that ending was truly fantastic. I'm going to pretend this is the true ending. Thanks again :)

That was wonderful. Thanks for writing this.

I have personally always wished that there was a scene like this in DH. I never could believe that two teenagers could sleep in a tent together for weeks and remain free of sexual tension. (Perhaps they did something and vowed to never speak of it again, and made sure not to mention it when writing the book) Ron was right to be suspicious.

You have perfectly summarized Harry's character in two sentences. "He'd remember all of a sudden, out of the blue, how dangerous it was for him to get close to others, about how much just knowing them made them all targets. Abruptly he'd put up his walls, shut them all out, and no one would be able to get through to him for days."

This is amazing. Now all the pieces are coming together. I must admit I was jarred to hear Hermione thinking that Memory Charms should be one of the Unforgivables, considering what she did to her parents. I'm assuming that either in this universe, it never happened, or that she feels serious remorse about it.