Ok I’m dying here. I’m, I think, just as anguished as Hermione.

I think I’ll lol to try to shake it off, ugh. Great writing, way to draw us in, but now I can’t finish my late brunch heh :/

Thanks a lot for writing, I think I need to read the next chapter asap.

This was a very hard to read chapter, omg. Suspense and Hermione’s pain is killing me.

(Still amazing story btw in case it’s not obvious lol)

Thanks for writing,

This is extraordinary, omg. I can’t believe I haven’t read it before.

Thanks a lot for writing,

This story is very hard to read. It's very well written, but the backward'ing and forward'ing make it entirely too confusing.

I REALLY like the set up and format you've used in this story. It's so fun trying to guess what happened!

Incredible. Simply, utterly incredible.

great great story. brought a smile to my face. thank you for writing

brilliant.

So good. I can feel how much they care. and love the twist with what future harry decided to do to try and protect Hermione.

I've been reading fanfiction for a while. I want to say firstly I'm so disappointed it has taken me this long to find this story. it was truly a treat to read, and wonderfully crafted

now a few SPOILERS :

I have a lot of great things to say about this but I'll start with my one little dislike. I don't think it needed to be time travel, while the time travel was cool and it was a vessel for you to change cannon, ultimately I don't think it was needed. That out of the way. the way you had Hermione watch over the past events and show them under a harmony light was a great decision. I also liked how you painted a very realistic love, love is messy there's a way Hermione and Harry love their cannon pairing and love each other as well. you painted that with pinpoint perfection. most people take a lazy way out and change Ron/Ginny to be terrible people. I could go on more but overall one of the best fics I've written and I hope others get the same joy I did

You are one of the most absurd writers on this site. You continue to languish in redundancies with the same shit that was in the official story and then your lite divergence from that is absolutely fucking stupid. I swear I'm going to spend effort in seeing if this story can be stricken down or removed from this site. You have NO originality in your storytelling, just a flair for tweaking what we all know...and the path it followed...with little inserts. A big fucking angst driven circle jerk of nothing, except a change in the protagonist's relationship with another character. Somebody should spit on this story.

Someone should hit this with a strike of some sort. The rehashing inner monologue of each first section is grating & damn near an extension of what Rowling what. Same situations, scenarios & even bits of dialogue.
That person we all know who loves to talk to much, just to hear their own shit at great length...that's you. And it's nauseating by now.

All this fucking angst. And notba thread on an actual beat towards resolutions.

Thank you for of the mounth.

Absolutely amazing story!