I love this story so please, please post more soon

Until next time

Gloria

First Part. AWESOME! i love the first parts, because it shows the deep raw emotion that shes going through. Reminding herself of the love she has for Harry and how shes had to put it aside. and how shes giving up everything for him cuz of her love for him.

secing part.

MEMORY CHARM! i knew it! well i knew it was along the lines of it. lol. that is starting to explain things. like maybe someone put a memory charm on him to forget a certain moment with Hermione? or IDK. if i get ahead of myself it dont turn out like this at all.

the chapter was AMAZING! serously i cant tell you how much im loving how its being written out.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Okay so I absolutely LOVE your story! I love the format and how it keeps me guessing and wondering...basically I love everything about it! Your name Oddment Tweak..it's weird cause when you first published this story I didn't really give it any thought but later I just so happened to be looking over HP and the Philospher's Stone...and weirdly enough I was on the page when Dumbledore randomly said 4 words..."Nitwit!Blubber!Oddment!Tweak!" and I thought to myself "I've seen that somewhere before' and the rest is history! Anway enough of my rambling..please update soon!

So yes, I've picked up on the nice Weasleys (it's rather refreshing, actually-I don't mind Ron or Ginny at all when they're not with Harry or Hermione-though Ron IS a bit of a twat sometimes, haha), but what's the word on Dumbledore, then?

Could HE have placed this charm on Harry, then?

But wow, Harry must be REAL messed up if he wont wake up...but if he's lashing out at Ginny and Lily Luna so much at home why is he calling out Ginny's name while he's unconscious?

Hmm.

Looking forward to the next one! :D

What a very intriguing story. I can't wait to find out what is going on. I hope it ends happily for H/Hr, but as now it doesn't look to good. You do a wonderful job of writing. Keep up the good work.

I am really enjoying this story so very much. Post more soon

I wonder who put the charm on Harry and what cause it to break

Until next time

Gloria

Tsk tsk, Harry Harry Harry-just what is going on with you?

That mention of Harry's behaviour after the war is a hint, isn't it? Hmm, I'm not gonna write my speculations in a review in case I'm wrong, but this is rather interesting indeed.

Hmm, I don't think that intervention is going to work out very well at all..haha, I'm looking forward to it!

Great setup. I suspect the Mirror of Erised is involved. That would explain Harrys cut and his mood swing. Keep up the good work !

this is so good its driving me insane! i want to find out whats happening. You think your so clever, writing this story they way it is to keep us hooked, dont you? DONT YOU! ... Well you .

first part. AWW! Harry is so sweet! im starting to see they were obvious Harry and Hermione moments there at the beginning? So what happened? is that why shes going back in time to stop whatever happened that seperated them? Second part. Harry has gone mad. its like hes realizing his life has been a lie? but to take it out on his daughter? not right.

and maybe im so off, that what im thinking about how the story is going to turn is wrong. but for right now thats all i .

the chapter is AWESOME BRILLIANT!

i love your writing technique in this story.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Ohh, how interesting.

Just what DID Harry see at work that day, hmm? Must've been, yeah, something interesting pertaining to Hermione if the way he looked at her was any indication. Curious, curious.

And his hand-is it really that badly damaged or is there more to it? Hmm.

Aww, that first scene with the Philosopher's Stone was always one of my favourite scenes in the Harry Potter series. When I was 7 and read the book for the first time that scene decided my love for Harry and Hermione to be together in the end of my childish mind. They were so cute, haha.

But yes, once again another interesting (and frustrating in where I'm not quite sure what's going on yet!) chapter, but once again I'm looking forward to the next one! 8D

the "look"...interesting! what might it be?

im trying to decide if its Harry or someone else that shes following or now that im writing this review maybe im mistaken and shes not following anyone, maybe just trying to get to the bottom of what happened to Harry? top part was AWESOME! im loving how shes going back in time, and how were seeing what happened (never read the books) and thinking exactly about what she was thinking at the time. i love how she says thats when she fell in love with him.

second part, AWESOME too. WOW HARRY! is he finally realizing that he loves her? i wonder what happened to his hand and what they were moving. i really wished Hermione had gone after him, at least to help with his hand the muggle way.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Well well, isn't this rather interesting-you definitely have me curious now.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes next, so until then! :D

i am a little confused. i hope we get through the ron, mione, harry and ginny love feast soon i feel sick.

this is freakin awesome! i loved the beginning, it was brilliant, i think i see whats beginning to happen. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!