Very original and excellently plotted. You handled the loopholes and pitfalls of time travel well. Great read. Thanks for sharing your work.

Meh. I don't understand why Ginny and especially Hermione are shying away from cornering Harry and demanding to know what the matter is. I mean, Hermione's done that before, several times, and never let one of her friends close himself to the rest of them for so long. And Harry, despite his bad mood or anxiety, never refused to talk to Hermione..

So, in short, you made what I thought she should have done: make their bound stronger and not think about Ron and Ginny or anything. They could be upset, but Ron would eventually come by and if he truly did love Hermione, he would have let her be with Harry, just like Snape did to Lily.
Ginny, i don't know how it would turn out to her, I truly don't. I can imagine she doesn't wanting to talk to both of them, but I don't know, she could turn out to accept and move on.

I have never commented on any story before, but this, this is another.
I have always hopes that Hermione and Harry would end up together on the original canon, but books passed by and I saw that JK wasn't going to make them a pair. I understood it would be impossible for her to put them together, but I saw that she lost some opportunities through out the series to make them love each other and after all of the canon story see the other as more than sister/brother relationship.
So, in short, you made

Oh. And Shats about to hit the fan..er..do wizards even use fans? It’d have to run on magic, wouldn’t it?

Honestly, the writing is ok, but your overall portrayal of Harry's love for Hermione and the sacrifice his willing to make to allow her to Live her life is really heartwrenching. Your premise for their love is why I ship them so, that they can't be because of how complicated it would make everything, like a more complicated Romeo and Juliet. Even though H/Hr is not canon, there are subtle hints that they did indeed love each other in canon, and its stories like this that make me tear up and hold on to the idea that they would find a way to to end up with each other, eventually.

Thank you for such a wonderful story. I loved it.

Ron and Hermione together makes me feel squicky (is that a word?) idk but I love your writing style and I'm super intregued about what is gong on. I can't wait to find out!

Ugh, this was wonderful. This fic was absolutely fantastic and I'm going to go recommend it a bunch now.

This chapter was hauntingly beautiful

Lord, so much angst but the payoff was so good

Harry James Sirius TT it's a long name but I'm glad Hermione insisted on adding Harry hahaha~ I was half expecting them seeing their whole family (with the kids)... only that it's not only four... but maybe 5 or 6... maybe Hermione's pregnant or smth... but then the mirror shows the deepest desire. Not... what could be the perfect scenario. If they wanted only four babies, then be it! I'm glad~ it's been more than 2 decades since the war... their kids are now on the verge of adulthood! I wonder how Ron is? Ginny? What have become of them? I hope they are both happy. Well, I'm glad to know Draco is alive as his last mention was his parents looking for him.

I'm quite shocked that Harry proposed immediately after the war, I mean they were only 17 and really young to be honest but then again~ if it's meant to be... oh well! Young love! The epilogue's proven that it /is/ meant to be. I am satisfied!

I forgot to mention how funny the Quidditch innuendos were! Ugh... now everything's... tainted. HAHAHAHAHA I wonder if Neville and Luna ended up with each other in this AU? Hmm~ I wonder...

I hope even after all these years the professors we all knew from the series are still all well and about! Except of course those who left us to rest , bless them all! I'm glad everything's okay and it's not written so sadly... thank you for sharing your ideas with us! This is really lovely. It respects the epilogue written by JKR but your twists are so amazing! Love you! Thanks, really!

DAMNED DAMN! THAT TWIST! BELLATRIX! HER KILLING CURSE REBOUNDING! DAMN! HERMIONE DIDN'T EVEN HAVE A CLUE OF WHAT WAS HAPPENING! DAMN!

True love. Right there. My god. And Neville! Neville, look at him, trusting Harry. Letting him go. And just listening to him after his instruction to him. : we stan Neville Longbottom! He didn't question Harry even though Harry's right there about to give himself up. Ronald can never! Oops

I hope the poor Sorting Hat is repairable!

It feels better now that I know he won't die but seeing his parents, and the other Marauders there. It still stung. I hate that they're all gone. No one to be the parent figure in Harry's life. He may be close to being an adult now, but still. To have a family figure... sigh.

At the very least, there's Hermione. And I think Ron will come around sooner rather than later. There's Neville, and Luna, and all the others in the D.A. It's okay, Harry. You just have to get rid of that monster and toss every one of his followers to rot in Azkaban then you can have the life you want. You /will/ grow old~ it's going to be fine.

MOM THEY! THEY HAD SEX! THEY! DID! IN BILL AND FLEUR'S HOUSE! WITHOUT A SILENCING CHARM! OAAOSKSKSKFKDKDMDMD I'M SCREAMING HERMIONE YOU WERE JUST TORTURED FLEUR PROBABLY DID SO WELL ON YOU DAMN HOW ARE YOU EVEN STILL /AWAKE/ I WOULD HAVE GONE STRAIGHT TO DREAMLAND! BUT OH WELL! KAKSSKSKSKSKSK

Ok ok so now ... .. . WAIT will it not matter? That Harry died? It doesn't matter, right? RIGHT? It's too late into the story for it to matter. You can't put me under another wave of misery! I can't have Harry harmed any more than I know from the books! /wails miserably/ I was hoping he'd kill Bellatrix too but oh well~ dkdkdkd guess we'll just have to wait!

BUT WAIT WHEN HARRY ASKED HERMIONE TO NAME ONE AFTER HIM HE'S STUPID OH MY GOD HE REALLY THOUGHT SHE'LL STILL END UP WITH RON OR WHAT? AT LEAST HE KNOWS SHE WON'T JUST DIE? Did he sacrifice Wormtail and himself so Hermione won't die? I don't understand! His plan! Gosh