Reviews for Making History |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well I would have preferred you using Zeke as opposed to Seig (Confused me for a bit) But otherwise this was a pretty good. Sad, but an interesting idea, and one which you handled very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad but wonderful. That's about all I can say about such a well written story. I think you captured the mood pretty well. It makes me feel so bad for everyone :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent piece of writing. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic. What a welcome breath of fresh air in the Zoids section. It's so nice to read about Fiona and Riese interacting...Basically, my day has been made. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic. The pacing is perfect, and the flashes back to what happened in the past read like well-crafted cinema. A thoroughly fitting monument to V & R's memory. I can imagine Shadow watching it all happen, unseen and from a distance. Then flying off back to the Breaker to continue waiting for Raven's return. :( |
![]() ![]() good story though i was wondering where in the world is zeke, he couldn't possible die with the liger and van. he would at least follow fiona as zeke listens to her as well. so who is sieg? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I loved it when you posted it on LJ (?). You actually made me kind of support the pairing, and I love the respect to the boys you made. Everything is so in character D:! *sniffles* |