|Reviews for The Fortunate Daughter|
| blackroseivy13 chapter 2 . 3/8/2013
Ok so I love this story
1. Because it is historically accurate and very well written
2. Cause you got Massachusetts down
I read state oc fics sometimes and there is always something that irks me about mass cause they get something wrong
I realized you must be from here when you mention Sweet Caroline
I immediately starting signing it in my head XD
| yays chapter 2 . 11/5/2011
And this is why I love my commonwealth. We kick ass.
| hills of happiness chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
Normally, I hate OC states to death. But I loved this story :) Massachusetts was a guy in my head, but you have converted me. Just like I used to think Canada was feminine xD It's so well written! Why are there no reviews yet? IMHO, the best parts were the Native American/pre Revolution parts. And the notes were very informative, thank you :)
My only criticism is that it's a little hard to understand. I'm still a little confused about the one that starts, "Richard is the brother closest to her in age." Is that about wars in general? There were a lot of other parts that were confusing before I read the notes, and even after I read them I had to keep switching back and forth between the notes and the story. Even though I am from Massachusetts. But overall, it was really good.