Brilliant story! I love it!

Great ! Very funny and well-written, a big pleasure to read !

rofl. loved this fic. every1 being so in-character and then out of character P especially loved Peter attacking Snape and Remus' howling P

Is that the end?

What happened to the Narcissia girl?

That was a really god story...

Quote: "My inner map," Sirius spoke normally, in the same tones in which he usually answered questions such as 'what's for dinner?' and 'who set fire to Severus, again?'. "You guys should all consider your inner maps, too."

Inner maps?

Well, I suppose with that, I will review. I don't really have anything spectacular to say, though: just that I was extremely amused by your story, and enjoyed it muchly.

I loved this - madcap MWPP, wacky plots and a rollicking adventure. It made me giggle! Peter, in particular, was brilliantly done. Thanks!

Oh. My. God.

This is friggin' hilarious! I printed out the whole story just so I can read it without killing my laptop. So incredibly, incredibly incredible! What can I say? Incredible!

First, James. So creative! "is pathetic and worthless"? HAH! Ah, it was wonderful to see a confident Quidditch star reduced to a quivering insecure ball of jelly.

Peter. Possibly my favourite chapter, although it would be extremely difficult to decide. Peter attacking Snape? It's so ridiculous, it's... brilliant! Everyone's got a wild side, and I got some weird looks from my brother for snorting with laughter. Over and over.

Remus. Ah, Remus. Broomstick chases? Windswept hair? Leather? "Aro" indeed! I enjoyed the part where Sirius reflects on the irony of having to assume the role of the 'responsible one'. And the game of "I Never" had me in stitches.

Sirius. What can I say? Well, I certainly hadn't been expecting him to go all monk on us, but it couldn't have been funnier. I think my brother thought I was having a seizure or something - throughout this story I was shaking with suppressed laughter. And I absolutely adore Yeats. Sirius Black reading "When You Are Old" is the stuff that dreams are made of! Rowr!

You kept the characters wonderfully defined, and there was hardly a paragraph that didn't attest to your witty sense of humour. So many laughs crammed into so few words... I envy your talent! The allusion to developing the Marauder's Map added depth, and you made Hogwarts an appropriately zany labyrinth. The revenge on Snape was absolutely priceless, as was the final line of the story. Bravo! (adds to favourites)

-Sanaryelle

A very entertaining exploration of the hidden aspects of the Marauders' personalities. Good fun.

This was very informative and very well written! I loved it!

ta,

Poppy

That was hilarious Sirius sorta scared me but it was still Hilarious!

Very enjoyable, I liked the way all four were incorporated equally.

hahahahahaha! i love this fanfiction! the moment i read it i couldn't stop laughing! I loved each of thier different/unique personalities, especially Remus _ imagine him like Sirius, lol! keep up the good work!

Fortunately, Sirius was able to distract him before anyone else had noticed anything.

"Wow, that insect looks just like Professor Trelawny!" he exclaimed breathlessly. And accurately. "Think it's deliberate?"

Hee-he, I really like this story. Good job.

Aww, I feel so bad for poor Remus! :-( Hysterical, though.

"That's Narcissia Lepervanche!"

Hee hee hee hee hee... That's incest! But I'm sure *that* joke wasn't intended...

Hysterical, again, great job! It reminds me rather of a fable... *grin*

Very very very very very very very very very funny! I like this a whole lot. You rock!