Reviews for Punisher and Manslayer
Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
About time! Great work on how Castle clipped Iwanbo. That's a big motherfucker, man. But I think this Kenshin-Castle partnership might work out just fine...only for them to fight in the end when the cops think it'll be time to bring Castle in.
Guy Fawkes522 chapter 2 . 9/24/2010
Nice job but a few things:

You seem to be making Castle a bit cartoonish, he's not much of a talker. Also Castle's really indifferent to law enforcement and the NYPD is indifferent to Castle, too. Speaking of which, you are aware that Soap works for the Punisher, right? And Micro's not really a hands on kind of guy.

Other than that, good chapter. Update soon.

FREEDOM!FOREVER!

"He who does not punish evil commands it to be done." Leonardo Da Vinci

"Whoever saves one life saves the world entire."

Nella tentazione

Cercando la gloria

Il prezzo da pagare

E' la caduta dell'uomo

[translation:

In temptation,

seeking for glory,

the price to pay

is the fall of mankind]

Our country, in dealing with the other countries, may she always be right, but it is still our country, right or wrong."

I do not aim with my hand; he who aims with his hand has forgotten the face of his father.

I aim with my eye.

I do not shoot with my gun; he who shoots with his gun has forgotten the face of his father.

I shoot with my mind.

I do not kill with my gun; he who kills with his gun has forgotten the face of his father.

I kill with my heart.

May Metallica be with you.
Cylon One chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Really cool present-day alternate universe with those of Kenshin in what sounds like an alternate world of that Punisher: War Zone movie.

I am rather glad that Micro lives in this because I really didn’t like it when he got killed in the movie.

Seeing versions of Kenshin and others so far of his world in our century was quite interesting.

I think this story has potential.

A few parts in this story I thought could use a little better description in them.

Like saying the Kings had pursued Frank into the game store.

Was it open or not.

Did the place evacuate when Frank went in there and that clued in the Kings he was there.

And shouldn’t they have had an idea of his looks when they went after him?

Then there’s at the Brasco’s where I think it should have said walk-in freezer for the freezer hiding the weapons.

And then a little something could have been told of how Kenshin and Frank got to a subway.

Before there were parts that got me confused on how many goons Shishio has got with him in New York.

One of the neat things I thought in this was when Jigsaw showed Shishio that CornerShot weapon.

Unless I’m off, that was a weapon showed in an episode of Future Weapons.

Was it?

Same thing with that RPG-29 Vampir grenade launcher?

Wish you well with the rest of this.
Guy Fawkes522 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Its very good and I like it.

the only problem is that you need to know more about Frank's equipment.

1) Frank RARELY uses Glocks, his preference is more to the M1911A1

2) The 'Bowie' Knife that I believe you refer to is the M4X Knife used in the movie 'Punisher: War Zone.

Other than that great job.

"He who does not punish evil commands it to be done." Leonardo Da Vinci

"Whoever saves one life saves the world entire."

Nella tentazione

Cercando la gloria

Il prezzo da pagare

E' la caduta dell'uomo

[translation:

In temptation,

seeking for glory,

the price to pay

is the fall of mankind]

May Metallica be with you.
BLAKKSTONE chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Good job.

I wasn't familiar with the Ruroni Kenshin characters. I looked them up, but it wasn't necessary, you've made this accessible.

The dueling views of justice thing has been done before in Punisher comics, but you've pulled it off well here, in my opinion.

Looking forward to reading more.
Tears of Deathwishxxx chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Hmm, I figured unless Kenshin went back to his old ways, this fic would never work. But this is the beginning. Time will tell. Overall, you're doing a great job.