Reviews for My Savior
Guest chapter 14 . 1/20
autumnsimril chapter 14 . 10/14/2016
Excellent story. Especially considering how young you were when you wrote it. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Kayleigh513 chapter 14 . 10/10/2015
loved reading this amazing please make more maybe with seth or embey and bella thanks though enjoyed reading it
Brandi Neri chapter 14 . 7/29/2015
Novel's addict chapter 14 . 7/7/2015
It's. So so so so goood i loved it a lot
Marax3 chapter 14 . 12/22/2014
Kemq chapter 14 . 12/9/2014
good story
Guest chapter 14 . 11/15/2014
sampam69 chapter 14 . 10/28/2014
This was a beautiful story thank you so much for sharing :-)
Guest chapter 6 . 9/15/2014
Omg! I want Angela to be my best friend! She's so awesome!
Marax3 chapter 10 . 7/25/2014
how i wish to be bella at that moment lol ...
naked paul ohh yeaa me likey :D
Marax3 chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
awww i wanted to cry with her :"(
i love my paul my wolf man :)
jacksperluvr chapter 13 . 6/26/2014
I just reread this story and I still love it.
fandomshit chapter 14 . 4/27/2014
I had an entire critical speech prepared, but i saw one of your author notes which said youre 14
ofcourse theres room for improvement as there is in any writing, but FOURTEEN
Amazing storyline, i LOVED the originality
You have great potential
I mean its been 4 years since this story, youre as old as i am, so you must have definately imprived by leaps and bounds
Just wanted to say that it is all bloody fantasic. At some points, it seems a bit too fast. Some tweaks here and there, and youre good to go
I recomment you read Be like water by Taoist elf
I love your work
Fancyunicorn chapter 11 . 3/8/2014
what if Edward did manage to eject his venom into Bella's system and the transformation already began when he started to run and all the wolfs ran past Bella as she dropped to the floor and he system slowly started to shut down and Edward made it to the edge of the Rez before escaping into the night traveling back to Alaska but not before shouting "BETTER HOPE IT'S NOT TO LATE TO SAVE BELLA." then speeding off and as what he just said starts to function into everyone else's brain Paul is already off but when he gets there its to late and she's already lying on the floor silent not moving and barely breathing and Paul can't suck the venom out because it already traveled to far into her blood stream and it would kill him if he tried because venom kills wolfs...WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF IT HAPPENED LIKE THAT?
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