Reviews for Severus' birthday surprise
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
xentrya chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
)) I swear to God I can already imagine the whole scene.
The Hare and the Otter chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
I noticed that some things were misspelled, like min when I think you mean mind. So if you edit it a little, I think it would be really good. It's cute, and I love cute. :)
LillianaSnape212 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Great story! I really love when Sev gets great birthday presents *winks*!

Um...just wanted you to know that the story is all in bold and tends to hurt the eyes a bit. It might be better if you changed it to normal. Just my opinion. Otherwise, i loved it.