|Reviews for Like the Sun|
| zophtoko chapter 14 . 7/5
lol I love azula.
| zophtoko chapter 5 . 7/5
lmaoo toph keeps screwing up with saying that her and Zuko are together . she dug herself deeper into the grpund
| Tophzuko chapter 14 . 9/3/2016
Ohhhh. They gonna get it on later. Cuz i know that zuko is gonna go after her. Hahha i LUV this all. Azula is so AWESOME. She is actually pretty sweet. I luv her personality. Toph is so original i luv her. Zuko felt the pain whwn toph was in a coma and when she wasnt around him. He cares for her , thats his World right there after all. #TOKO #ZOPH #ZUPH
Blind Bandit & Blue Spirit
Earthbender & Firebender
Melon Lord & Fire Lord
Heiress & Prince
Blind & Scarred
Bold/Strong/Stubborn & Fierce/Strong/Gentle
Toph Bie Fong & Fire Lord Zuko
F*king Fans like me!
| Tokozoph chapter 9 . 9/2/2016
Yessss. Damn Toph took ALL the hits that were directed at zuko. From scratches, to stabbed, to poisoned. On top of that, she shielded him, she didnt leave him lie mai supposedly did when she "died", she made him and the guys swords, she fought until she was unconscious because she was hurt and tired from working all day...just to protect HER BOY Zuko. Ahhh so cute!
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/2/2016
There u go! Thats what was needed. Toph and zuko needed katara and aang. Wtf would they do without them? Hahaha. Luv this so much
| Rue chapter 11 . 5/25/2016
It was interesting at the beginning. Then you throw severas oc's and it got boring really quickly. I lost the plot with all those airbenders and the "psycopath". My question here is, why would you create oc's that are air benders when this thing is literally call "The Last Airbender". What's the plot of this story? I dont get it. You got me and you lost me. It was supposed to be about zuko's problems, being the fire lord and all that, but then you focused on your oc's. Like, what is going on anymore? Dont know and now, dont care.
| The King in White chapter 14 . 5/28/2015
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| Celestia's Paladin chapter 14 . 3/31/2012
I wonder how I manged to miss this one. I mean damn this is a great story, and was started well before I dropped off FFN for a few months last summer... Overall one of the best I have seen, kept them all in character while maturing them as they should be after the War. I was actually surprised to see Azula being a good guy and helping Zuko in her own way, I happen to like seeing her redeemed so another point in my book.
Celestia's Paladin: For Honor and Duty
| MainCrick chapter 3 . 3/9/2012
Omg, the last lines made me laugh so hard. I'm liking the progress, the garden, and the way they're older but haven't become...to old, like often happens when attempting a more mature portrayal.
So, I see you decided to ...kill Mai.
But making the death somewhat part of a tantrum gives it the smudged drama often found on real life. I don't mind the choice.
And I realy can't wait to see them undercover.
| MainCrick chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
I love it!
I really liked the summary when i read it, but wasn't sure what to expect. I like the future you propone; not too sunny, not to dark.
Toph seems to have grown nicely, and I like how Zuko associates to her; I can see something more coming up ahead, but it all remains very credible. good work
| nakala chapter 14 . 1/12/2012
i just have to say this fic was really good there were a lot of little mysteries but none got me quite like the Azula one i had no idea that she was doing all that for zuko i really liked that because it was original i haven't read an atlas fic where azula redeems herself
also the jiva siwang fight that was pretty good i have to admit i figured out their affiliation pretty quickly so that reveal wasn't really a reveal to me as well as the Mai thing i knew she wasn't dead from the moment i heard how she died but anyway i really enjoyed those things about the fic
but there is one thing that stood out to me that bothered me it was "i resemble that statement" thing it appeared a lot but its actually supposed to be "i resent that statement"
other than that the writing was good the grammar was good besides the fact that you used a lot of pronouns when there should have been more proper nouns so that the reader was well aware of who was speaking
another good thing i liked about the fic was how you revealed past situations with just flashback dialogue that i have never seen before and i have to say i prefer that to a full on flashback
so yeah i really liked the story
| tomboy 26 chapter 14 . 11/12/2011
I finally got the chance to read this .. I loved it. It was funny, cute, and just quirky. I loved this whole story really, and though at times I got a bit confused, by the end I not only knew what was going on but I loved every step of the way. And Toph would never let their love life be boring .. she's too awesome for that _ Great story.
| EmiStone chapter 14 . 11/4/2011
OMG! I cant believe its over! PLEASE Write a sequel! For me? I love this story, its my fav on fanfiction. Its FANTASTIC! Keep it up, Sparky!