|Reviews for What was she doing?|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
| rawsunshine chapter 18 . 10/14/2013
This was so much fun! I loved loved loved the story, how playful it was with Paul an Bella. I am obsessed with their pairing at the moment. Thank you so much for posting the story, you rock! You're a very talented writer!
| DivaMommy chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
Love the way you write Bella and Paul.
| sandy.morganlopez chapter 18 . 9/24/2013
OMG loved the whole story but the Epilogue was my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE part! LMAO!
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/24/2013
love a good paul and bella
| SomewhatLucid chapter 7 . 9/20/2013
My neighbor and I now have a thing we do, When something happens one of us says, "This is all your fault," and the other says, "Yeah probably."
| Red Reaper88 chapter 18 . 9/11/2013
Hahaha love it
| LJ Summers chapter 18 . 8/28/2013
This was so fun! Bella felt just right, here and though I feel bad for Jake, I also am very happy for your W-Paul.
| RaivynBlack chapter 6 . 8/22/2013
im confused too but this is just ugh. i love paul
| RaivynBlack chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
you are my favorite.
| RaivynBlack chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
"What the hell Paul? You're still in high school?" she squeaked at him.
He looked confused. "Bella I'm seventeen."
hahahah that is great!
| RaivynBlack chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
im very glad im home alone right now. wow.
| carina2026 chapter 18 . 7/8/2013
Love it! I'm about to head over and read Paul's side :)
| Toni Masen chapter 18 . 7/4/2013
Paul, yeah, i'm really beginning to like him, LOTS ;-)
I like that you use the words tea and Mum.
Would you give an example of an Australian swear word please so I can use it at work and at the gym!
Thank you for your reply. Paul's POV next :-)
| eboni721 chapter 18 . 7/2/2013
Nice! I was following this story but for some reason I hadn't read the last 3 chapters. So when I reread it today this all caught me by surprise! Great story.