| Reviews for What was she doing? |
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   4evernaya.0 chapter 18 . 1/21 ended too soon. love this story. ive read it three times beginning to end already. still too soon. |
| The Empress Narwhal chapter 18 . 10/25/2024 This was a great read. |
| MissNikita chapter 18 . 7/28/2024 You are such a good p0rn writer |
| The Soup Review chapter 18 . 5/10/2023 Good Soup |
| Patriciadiane chapter 18 . 11/9/2022 What a fun ending to this story |
| Patriciadiane chapter 17 . 11/9/2022 So these two are now accepting each other. Hmm, Charlie? |
| Patriciadiane chapter 16 . 11/9/2022 This Paul is very endearing. |
| Patriciadiane chapter 15 . 11/9/2022 Wow, I didn't expect them to turn on him |
| Patriciadiane chapter 14 . 11/9/2022 Charlie is really trying |
| Patriciadiane chapter 13 . 11/9/2022 Curiouser and curiouser |
| Patriciadiane chapter 12 . 11/9/2022 Bella really pushed the best friend angle. Curious about what is up with Sam and why he wants to talk to Sam? Where is Paul's family? |
| Patriciadiane chapter 11 . 11/9/2022 What is Paul's back story? Who is Embry's father? |
| Patriciadiane chapter 10 . 11/9/2022 These two are crazy for each other and I am wondering when they will utter the words. |
| Patriciadiane chapter 9 . 11/9/2022 These two are a hoot. Their dance is quite funny |
| Patriciadiane chapter 8 . 11/9/2022 Bella is on the fast track and Paul cares about her whether he wants to or not. |