Reviews for Oh What Shadow Clones Can DO
Phoenix chapter 52 . 3/19
Such an awesome chapter thank you for writing it.
Aeroshadowclone chapter 1 . 3/18
but it's a forbidden technique regards for rules. Should of had to ask the Hokage or something. decent start though and with over 200k words I can't stop here.
arinasution5 chapter 8 . 3/10
xNaruHina chapter 13 . 2/23
This isn't chess their isn't any rooks. Also, it is still happening so I decided to point out that most of the things you put between parenthesis is stuff that shouldn't be added in any story because you aren't in the story. You are just the author that writes the story so their shouldn't be any personal thoughts or opinions coming from you written there.
xNaruHina chapter 12 . 2/23
Once your reserves are their you shouldn't lose them.. They wouldn't be back to genin level reserves nor would their control revert back either. It is like riding a bike, even if you haven't ridden a bike in decades you still retain the ability to just hop on a bike and ride it whenever. Now when you add having an injury that hampers your ability to walk or ride you do have to take physical rehabilitation but you still have the knowledge of how to ride the bike and when you are all healed up you can instantly hop right back onto the bike and ride it. They need the physical rehabilitation yes, but their muscle memory and their actually abilities would be unaffected once they can move around again.
xNaruHina chapter 11 . 2/23
Ah, Sakura is pleasantly malleable.
xNaruHina chapter 10 . 2/23
More instruments really? Also, I highly doubt Eric Johnson exists in the Naruto world. Even on the offhand chance that guitars do..
Kale chapter 52 . 2/20
Your story is really difficult to read. I have not read the rest because I was just checking if you had done the formatting properly. If you do proper formatting I am sure your story will do much better.
troutman30 chapter 39 . 2/22
Wow, you took out Orochimaru's strongest shinobi after Kabuto and made him a footnote. What a waste!
xNaruHina chapter 8 . 2/22
You should stick to one POV. Constantly switching the perspective is jarring and disrupts the flow of the story. Also why would Naruto get a whole new team when in just over a year he can have his old team back? Couldn't he just help other teams on their missions to gain experience anyways?
xNaruHina chapter 7 . 2/22 You really add wayyyyyy too many A/N's in the middle of a story. It seriously disrupts the flow of the story and takes all of the immersion away from it. A/N's go in the beginning or the end. It is a huge no-no to put them in the middle.
xNaruHina chapter 5 . 2/22
Okay, the whole violin thing was stupid and definitely unnecessary. It was also out of left field. Seriously? What is he going to do next, unseal a piano in the middle of a battle and start playing? Just no. There is no point in that random hobby and it makes at least a sentence or two of unnecessary reading.
xNaruHina chapter 4 . 2/22
Funny prank for sure! But why didn't Naruto get a perfect score since he was training so hard, definitely harder than TenTen, that's for sure.
xNaruHina chapter 3 . 2/22
Mehhh, so this is a dual self insert story? Those usually don't end up very interesting to be honest and most of the time they fail epically. :/
xNaruHina chapter 2 . 2/22
Hmm, Naruto already knows who his father is and Kurama is friendly. Does this mean he will learn the Hiraishin!? I hope so~
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