Reviews for Torn
Guest chapter 20 . 3/13
Quite good
Angua chapter 4 . 1/31
Very minor, but the word used in the U.K when referring to paper money is note rather than bill. As in, "bank note".
sfjoellen chapter 8 . 12/8/2014
it's a good story, but the sirius/pettigrew thing isn't working in my opinion. Peter would have run long ago. Peter isn't brave enough to stay with Percy once Padfoot shows up (the rumor of Padfoot had Peter running away in canon) much less raid moody's desk for Sirius' wand. He'd have just scampered, maybe tried another family, maybe looking for Voldie.
waybetterthanyou chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
When I saw your picture I was like, 'Holy crap, what if Severus was reading a Severus/Harry fic?' He would flip!
thepkrmgc chapter 20 . 10/17/2014
i highly reccomend this story to anyone fortunate enough to come across it!
thepkrmgc chapter 19 . 10/17/2014
wait a minute, do molly and arthur know the truth about snuffles or not?
thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 10/17/2014
you seem to have ignored peters accusations, not that thats necisaraly a bad thing
thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 10/17/2014
peter just had to screw things up, looks like that happy ending has been postponed
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 10/17/2014
yay for happy endings!
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 10/17/2014
i wonder who's after harry, its probably peter but it might also be a drunken sirius
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 10/17/2014
i completely forgot about the werewolf thing: glad that you didnt though
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 10/17/2014
old betrayals are something that even magic cant cure...
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 10/17/2014
I wonder whats in that letter, did harry catch on to sirius or is it pettigrews doing
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 10/17/2014
it seems the weasly/potter freindship has started a bit early in this verse: wizarding britain is n awfully small place after all
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 10/17/2014
and the proof is revealed, it should be cool to see the old freinds reunite at last!
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