Reviews for An Unexpected Incident
Rae Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 7/30/2020
What an unusual premise, but little Spock and Little Uhura are adorable and I love how this situation gives Sarek and Amanda a uniquely unobscured perspective on them. Also, really nice touch depicting Spock as staying silent and apart, hovering near the door, and pressing his forehead against the wall. And the moment he gets news that he thinks Uhura is dead, he starts to wail. Having been responsible for a roomful of three-year-olds for several weeks in a row, I saw this exact behavior from one boy. (Not that he thought anyone was dead, but whenever his parents dropped him off, he'd be standing in exactly that posture and that position in the room, wailing, until his tears dried up and he'd be silent, until he'd start to relax and then abruptly join all the other children and starting playing with them, indistinguishable from the rest in terms of behavior from that point on.) So your description of 3-to-4-year-old Spock doing that just felt spot on.

I enjoyed Amanda's fascination with the little ones, and Sarek's gentleness and willingness to understand his son's perspective. Such a welcome change from all the long-held tension between them.

Lovely writing!
magensby chapter 1 . 5/10/2019
The toddlers Spock and Uhura are just too cute.
wswpub chapter 1 . 5/10/2019
wow that was a wonderful story. I'm going to go see what else you've written.
splodee chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
Ugh, this is too cuteeee. Lil Spock is sooooo precious, and Nyota is such a darling. Bravos to the author!
whirlingskirts chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
Adorable! and so imaginative!
Uhura the 9th chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
Spock declaring his love for Uhura is so sweet! I really like Spock talking in Vulcan and defending his love . this story is really cute and funny.
Uhura the 9th chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
I love the tender interaction between Spock and Uhura, it's so cute how he took care of her. Plus Uhura used a quote from the Bible:"your people are my people" nice touch. Also that Spock's supported. Him and they shared great dialogs together.
Uhura the 9th chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
I really like how the children interacted ! How protective little Spock is. Wish it could fit in TOS which I love the best! This is a great story enjoyed reading, like the positive interaction of Spock's parents.
Lavender73 chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
Wow! I just found this in May 2017 and I am blown away at how incredible this is. I teared up at the end with Nyota saying "wherever you go, I go..."
MINAH25 chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
This is such a cute story.
Dutyfree chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
I randomly started thinking of this fic the other day on the bus, and had to come find it! Absolutely adorable! I hope you get back to writing Spock/Uhura fic soooonnn
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
Thnx for the read. One could almost feel the angst of Spock's "keening".
Lightz1 chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Beautiful story! Can't believe I only just now found thus one! I've been reading spuhura fanfiction for 3 weeks and this us 1 of the top 5 for sure!
xlenaleex chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
AHHH! Knife in the feels! My goodness you're amazing!
Ironist-lady chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
This story breaks my heart. It's so beautiful. Thanks for writing and posting it.

I love how you explore the idea of Nyota and Spock facing the idea of losing each other. How it seems natural for them.

It's so funny when Spock undresses in front of Nyota without even thinking of it.

Awesome.
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