wonderful write more vampfics please

I love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & I’m happy that Bella & Edward are Married

Thank you for writing this beautiful story… I don’t know where you are right now but you have a talent in writing and I just hope you’re doing well. This story has kept me company for the past few days and it left marks that would probably stay with me for a long while. what a beautiful story

I can’t believe you just did that! just when we’re about to have happy times.. sigh.. but I guess it has to happen. Anyway, this chapter was really the closure we all need. I feel bad for Alice, but I love how you potray that even someone as gifted as her can also be flawed too. I hope she’ll figure out how to get used to her new.. form. And Lucky! I’m so relieved he’s still around! I was worried for a sec there ngl. I’m also very happy that Bella’s got to live her last moments as human to the fullest. It’s something I wish Bella would’ve done in the og series too honestly..

oh my god that was an intense chase. i couldn’t help but get annoyed at the Cullens for disappearing at the worst time possible. they probably have their reasons (maybe even Alice told them not to come) but still… they better have good enough reason for this

oh wow! now that’s an unexpected twist. it just made the story 1000 times more interesting! and fun

I wish Edward would just tell her about Renee already so that there are no more lies between them

that’s the second time I’ve cried while reading this story. my heart breaks for Bella

Ah.. I held my breath the whole time Bella was rummaging through Edward’s closet. I was afraid she would find something else she wasn’t supposed to see. If this story wasn’t told in 2 POVs and we didn’t know things the way Edward does, this could easily pass as a horror/suspense fic! A wonderful one at that. You sure have a way to keep us readers at the edge of our seat haha

Bella is such an interesting character. she’s so… observant, and yet she has no sense of self preservation. Like if I were dating a guy who i met several times “by accident” and he seems to be keeping secrets from me AND keeps a binder of music sheets named after people with dates on it, I’d be running away the first chance I get lmaoo

You write so beautifully.. so well.. I literally cried when Charlie told Bella he’s stopped doing chemo

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. It made me feel very emotional at times, a genuine testament to your talent for storytelling.

Great story
Thank you

Thank god for the Alice chat I was wishing for it

I thought Leah Clearwater was a problem.
Now Bella opening her eyes
Yikes