This story had my lmao so many times! Bella will make a fine pirate if I do say so. Great story, awesome job.

Brilliant. Love how I can see the characters' developing throughout the story.

Seriously I'm going to send you a new message once a month telling you to turn this into a book.

Your future stalker lol
Willow

ps. I wouldn't let me review the last chapter twice lol.

I have been up all night reading this fic on my 50inch tv. I blame your amazing ability to fall in love with characters for my lack of sleep and blurry vision. You need to change some things around and the names, publish it and it will be a best seller. YOU are an amazing writer. Don't let it go to wast.

New Fan

Willow

will there be more to read of this in the future? so hooked on this story and the pairing too bad about the Plagiarism sorry to read about that Lyndsey!

Do you know if there is any story where Bella gets preggers with anyone else other then Edretard? sorry I know this question has nothing to do with you story but its like I totally can't seem to find any soon to be parent vampire pairing with Bella!

Just reading how Edward freaks out so funny the character is my least favorite and the guy is a control freak moron douchebag!

Anyway before I forget thank you thank you thank you for writing and sharing this with the world made my day reading this thank you!

Great story.

im sorry couldn't resist 'to curious for my own licking'

Love it. It seems a lot of people forget Alastair, pirates.

I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORY! Epically awesome!

Remiss? "Why do you keep using that word? I do not think it means what you think it means."
Remiss - adj - negligent, careless, sluggish, slow in performing one's duty

I loved your story ! thank you to have written this, It made me laugh D
Your Bella and your Alistair were just perfect

I really like the Bella/Alistair pairing, and out of all (and "all" isn't really that many, sadly) the stories I've read with that pairing, this is hands down the best. Great work!

I really enjoyed this story, the way you managed to keep Alistair believable, and tail portray character development was brilliant!
I also enjoyed Bella's character arc, and the way all the elements came together to create a happy, yet realistic ending.
You deserve so many kudos for this story, especially given that it seems not to be a conventional pairing (which is a problem for me now, since I really want to read more!).

This fic is fantastic, thought you should know.

Gahhh! This was fucking awesome. Just a really awesome fic. Definitely a real favourite. Gonna rec this to my friend.