Reviews for Mine Alone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, Hope you are doing well I read your story and you get my attention by your writing skills and the scene you mention in it. You are a fantastic writer and one of my fav one now, you really impressed me. The characters Bella , Jacob, and Edward details and expressions you insert in the story so As a commish artist I am wondering something pretty cool in my mind related to your story about artwork in reasonable prices so if you are interested to discuss more about it so must connect with me by my social handle given below and You can also see my portfolio/artwork on there Btw are you going to update more? Discuss : Instagram: murphy_adam08 Twitter: Murphyadam09 Gmail : Murphyadam809 Discord: murphy_adam09 |
![]() ![]() ![]() 14 years late but wow…. What a compelling story. Many parts were hard to read and I struggled to get through some portions but the ending made up for it. The tragic ending was just what this story needed. I don’t think I’ll ever forget it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thisending was perfect, my mind is blown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't help but be upset with Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, he's angry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, she has lost her mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent beginning |
![]() ![]() ![]() getting interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() What movie? The entire twilight saga is on Amazon prime tvthats where I watch for my fix. Great story btw |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, this reminds me of my daughter's ex and how his personality would go from hot to cold in seconds this is a good story, thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this so much! It was dark and beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I normally don't review stories but this is INTENSE. Woah. In all my time reading fanfics I've never really come across anything like this. GREAT JOB. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was one twisted tale. Very hard read in so many spots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg , I've read alottttt of stories in this fandom , but you my dear have moved up my favorites list . This was amazing . I couldn't put it down. You brought out all my emotions , I didn't know what to feel . I found this like I find a lot of my new reads from other writers favourites , I'm so glad I did. Well done. The most surprising thing to me is I hate aghast . For me it was like watching a train wreck and couldn't look away. I could go on and on . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... I was hoping Charlie was still alive :( And everybody else... I wonder how Edward killed all the Cullens. I do love how you ended this story though. I do have to say, some things have traumatized me haha I didn't know the human body could take so much pain and not die hahaha |