Reviews for Away to Neverland |
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![]() ![]() ![]() While I'm sad this story was abandoned, at least the arc was wrapped up. This story and its prequel were pretty good, I quite enjoyed them! It was enjoyable seeing Ranma being able to stand against Touhou characters, even if it was only for a moment. Like others said before, Suika feels off, but I didn't mind too much. Reimu was a bit too cold in my opinion though. Guess I'll ponder what you were going to do next with Ranma's jump into his own pocket dimension, both with how he was going to get out and what further applications he could do with it. My only real complaint is that the side stories going on in the beginnings of each chapter didn't feel entirely relevant. The Smith people thing just confused me, and I just began skipping the beginning, as it didn't add to what was going on with Ranma very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've heard that bugs/insects that live in more oxygen rich environments tend to grow bigger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well.. Ramna found a way to stuff himself in his pockets. Yukari will have soooo much fun with that :D (in the hypothetical next chapter) This story seems to be over, but thanks for still finishing the arc (this is a good place to cut the story quickly, instead of 2 or 3 chapters ago). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was half-expecting a whole f***ing train stuffed in Ramna's "shared pockets" (yeah... *that* train) Thanks for the laughs :) |
![]() ![]() In answer to your question: I want any sort of chapter, be it extra short, extra long, shortish, longish or normal or a mixture of the above, as long as it is a chapter for this fic written by you it will be marvelous. Either way, thank you for sharing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit. This may be the best Touhou fic I have ever read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Color manipulation sounds good. In theory, ANY conceptual ability can be used to bend the universe over your knee. It just takes enough dedication. |
![]() ![]() great story you should continue it |
![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() He has not updated this in seven years and the last time he updated a story was five years ago and when looking at his blogs and forums he expressed a reluctance to return to writing so if there is anyone brave enough, try contacting him/her and he/she might let you adopt the story. |
![]() ![]() Great! |
![]() ![]() Come back please. |
![]() ![]() I want an extra short chapter. Or an extra long chapter. Or a medium kind of length chapter. Any chapter at all really. Either way, thank you for sharing at least this much of this wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() I read the 'torture' chapter from your story 'wanderer' during lunch. Now this chapter during dinner. Am I unlucky or what? Thank you for sharing your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A shame this hasn't been updated in such a while... |