|Reviews for The Ones on the Computer|
| SuperVikinggirl chapter 2 . 6/10
That was really fun! So original! Thanks!
| SuperVikinggirl chapter 1 . 6/10
Wasn't expecting that! Brilliant!
| cfccfc chapter 2 . 5/20
Hits a little too close to home, doesn't it? Very funny and very clever. Thanks for sharing.
| CornishGirl chapter 2 . 5/20
I recognize myself! Very, very funny!
| Lewlou15 chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
I so loved this fic! Molest him back to health was one of my favorite lines!
| ryder21 chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Waving...frantically waving. Yep, I love me a good Dean womping so that we can get his clothes off ... to nurse hIm back to health again of course. Get your mind out of the gutter!
| Ginnylove9990 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Funny. Very very funny. I was laughing the whole time I was reading it. I am glad Dean did not go looking to see how many stories that are written about Sam getting hurt or sick or how close to death he comes.
| Purple Spoon of Doom chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
i will have you know i have done nothing to dean. . . yet
| Beckydaspatz chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
I am NOT one of these woman and I find this description apalling! *kicks a gagged Dean back under the table*
Yeah..haha, anyway :P
LOVED THIS! So Damn funny I choked on a pop I was sipping, my co-worker looked at me like I lost my marbles. BWahahaha, GREAT JOB!
"Get what?" whispered Dean nervously, glancing toward the door, reeling Sam in by the front of his jacket.-Oh my goodness, this...this is just fun! Poor Sam!
Dean looked at him, wide-eyed "like me?" He spluttered, "LIKE ME?" His mouth worked soundlessly like a stranded goldfish, "Well, they've got a friggin' funny way of showing it! " He glared at Sam, "In the stories I looked at, they stabbed me in the kidneys with a toasting fork, smashed my ribs, gave me pneumonia, had me laid up with a temp of 112 yakking up everything I'd ever eaten and then had Bobby removing my appendix in the back of the Impala with a penknife and an ice-cream scoop."
He hyperventilated briefly.
"they're giving me major abdominal surgery, dude; my innards are all over the internet; Sam, these people are describing parts of me that I've never seen!"
"Sammy, if they like me, God forbid; I would hate to get on the wrong side of them! They're freakin' psychotic."
"And don't even get me started on how they describe me … I cry, and I hug, and I whine; I cuddle you, Sam – YOU! I let you wash me and give me medicine and don't even punch your lights out!"
Sam cringed at the image of washing his brother …
"Sam, they make me sound like a pathetic, wussy, steaming great GIRL!"
Sam bit his lip so hard to keep from laughing, he tasted blood.
"In one of the stories", Dean continued, "I even whimper … have you ever heard anything so stupid? When was the last time you EVER heard me whimper?"
Sam looked at his watch, then hesitated. He didn't think 'half-an-hour ago' was exactly what Dean wanted to hear.
"It's not a sound I am capable of making," Dean whinged. Sam could have sworn it sounded exactly like a whimper.-YUP, I copy and pasted the entire second section cause it is just gold. Sparkling, shiny, priceless, GOLD.
CLANG! … The penny dropped resoundingly …
Dean stared at Sam, and silence reigned between them. The air was filled with nothing but the hiss of a sudden downpour outside.
Dean eventually spoke. "Ah."
A 50 megawatt grin spread across his face … "Wow!"
There was a short pause, "Sam, are you telling me that cyberspace is full of women wanting to molest me back to health?"
"Well, uh, yeah!"-I can literally SEE the light bulb sputter to life on top of Dean's GORGEOUS head. Love this one so, SO much!
| Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Oh my gosh! This is SO great! Can't wait to read the next chapter :D
| SPN Mum chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
What a woderfully funny and cute story! I love how Dean takes so long to realize just what Sam is telling him about why fangirls want to 'maim' him. lol
| DASEYS.lilies chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
I've read one about fanfiction writer's before...but your's takes the prize.
need I say how amazing it was.
you really are a great writer.
Another of your storys will be added to my favorites.
| SamFan chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
I am an odd person that for once dosen't want to make my Winchester man the hurt one, but the protecive. When Sam protects Dean, we all win. But I would not mind helping Sam (I guess, Dean would do, ;)) get back to health.
| Greenbush chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
What a brilliant idea! It brought tears to my eyes. I defy anybody not to laugh out loud at Sam’s explanations. And, if God didn’t want us to think this way, He wouldn’t have invented oestrogen, right?
| VoicesInTheWind chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
Oh! I was laughing ... so hard ... through the whole thing ... the words were swimming on the page! There is a reason the episodes with Chuck in them are my favorites - the boys are so cute when they're dealing with their fans! Brilliant job on this, it made my day!