|Reviews for Edroar the Angry Lion|
| m0t0b33 chapter 19 . 6/4
hi.. everything ok there? are you stuck again? I kinda miss Edroar..
| RK913 chapter 17 . 6/2
Please please update soon
| Krissy chapter 19 . 6/1
I'm so glad to see you updating again. I fell in love with this story years ago and didn't have much hope for seeing it updated again, let alone two updates. As much as I love the interactions between Bella and Edward, it's the glimpses of Edward's past that I enjoy the most. I've spent more time than I'd like to admit thinking about what may have happened.
There's one thing about this chapter that bothers me: the line "You haven't seen nothing yet, Little Lamb". I'm supposed to believe that wealthy, upper-class Mr. Cullen, owner of a publishing company, would use a double negative like this? I don't buy it. It sounds like something Jasper would say (minus the Little Lamb part), given that he's southern.
| AndreaO22 chapter 19 . 6/1
Love this story but I'm terrified of the update schedule. In a week it'll have been 6 years since publishing and there's only 19 chapters? I hope you plan to update the remaining chapters more frequent than before.
| Darkward Darling chapter 19 . 6/1
As always, enjoyed the latest chapter of Edroar. I looked at when you started this fic and realized that I've been reading along with you for 6 years! I say that not to chastise your writing speed. Not at all. On the contrary, I think it is awesome that you've kept plugging away and have managed to turn out good work chapter after chapter. You're like my fanfic spirit animal at this point!
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/27
Please more than 5 chapters!?...
| Book-Nerd 4 lyfe chapter 19 . 5/27
Can't wait for more! I love the dynamic of their relationship!
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/25
Loved this chapter! Thank you so much for updating! I hope you keep going I'm really curious about Edwards 6th birthday!
| Browns chapter 19 . 5/26
How could we (she says like this is a mutual endeavor) possibly resolve all the Lion's problems in just five chapters? I mean, we don't have a clue why he hates his father and everyone. We don't know why said father is a cold robot man. What was in the letter? Why did he violate the Lion's "stay away" rule? Why was the Lion so afraid when he tried to treat Bella? We haven't even seen Jake and his son in forever!
There's just so much to resolve. Not that I doubt your skills...I will always bow down to your keystroking prowess in articulated combinations that form the most enticing banter filled moments. I just...there's so much to resolve!
To be honest I'm looking forward to its conclusion, not because I want to goodness over, but because then I can read it from start to finish without waiting for the next chapter. Yours is one of the few WIP I am reading. And by that I mean...THE ONLY ONE.
Now onto your actual words...I like that they're changing each other and learning about themselves. Though Edward seems hell bent to deny any change to his solitude and brewing. Jealousy, tender caresses...he's changing right before our dry grainy eyes (it's too good - can't waste time blinking).
As always your words brought me true joy.
Enjoy your holiday, Chica!
| Browns chapter 18 . 5/26
Life's kicking my ass, so I thought what would make me really happy this morning, and the words "Edroar update" floated through my mind. However, when I got to the Ch:18 update, I had no idea what was going on, so I decided a little Ch:17 re-read would do me some good.
The next thing that floated through my mind? "When the hell did they start kissing?" Anyway, goal accomplished...I've got my happy onto the next chapter and sadly most likely another day from hell. Thanks for the chuckles...*mwah*
That was for the Ch:17 re-read this morning. FF wouldn't allow me to review twice, so boo to them. I found a way...
Now for Ch:18 - OMG that was so freaking awesome! Makes me miss the days of being part of team Edroar. But I digress...you, my dear, are the queen of witty banter. This coming from someone that's a banterer (I know that's not a word but it fits) in real everyday life. I honestly enjoyed the banter better than the delicious lemon. Don't get me wrong that was some well written word porn, which was much liked, but the banter wins. Ultimately, I was struck my Edroar's choice and desire to continue ignoring the obvious. I can't wait to see what these two get up to next.
By the way, I'm so glad you're still writing, even if it's at the pace of a snail. Take your time and don't be like me that promises resolution to her readers and has yet to deliver.
Warm hugs, Chica!
| RK913 chapter 19 . 5/24
Please update soon! This is such an amazing story
| TheFadedLight chapter 19 . 5/25
i can't believe it's taken me this long to read this story! i've always seen it, and i am so happy that i finally caught up. this is awesome and i love the way you write! the characters are great, and i love the banter and story. great job!
| moonas chapter 19 . 5/23
That meal will probably get burned or bad going to happen just a feeling
| Anonymous chapter 19 . 5/23
I've been with this book since I was 16, now I'm 18. So glad your planning on finishing it. But for the love of twilight please PLEASE don't write a sad ending. Every fan fiction story I've been reading lately starts out great, and ends up with someone dying or breaking up. Where are the rainbows and cookies?
| starsmina chapter 19 . 5/22
Wow I totally fell in love with this story! I love how Bella is a take no shit type of woman and I think Edroar thinks the same lol
Didn't like Emmitt being fired but was happy to see Jasper jump in to help him out. Someone definitely needs to slap Mike, gosh I seriously hate divas like that man or waman.
Still trying to figure out Edward
's problem, it has to do something with his dad of course but hopefully we'll find out soon. I'm so glad I found this story can't wait for the next update.