Reviews for Inevitable Predictability
Guest chapter 8 . 6/7/2011
you really should update more often. cause even though you have stuff in your life you don't wait like four months or whatever to update cause you almost lost my audience. this girl who used to live in ireland doesn't llike it. but i'm not sucking up to you, though I think your story is awesome! Oh and to show that you care about your reviewers you can typ
Guest chapter 8 . 6/7/2011
you really should update more often. cause even though you have stuff in your life you don't wait like four months or whatever to update cause you almost lost my audience. this girl who used to live in ireland doesn't llike it. but i'm not sucking up to you, though I think your story is awesome! Oh and to show that you care about your reviewers you can typ
Kennie Loves 'HP'TCoN'TIC chapter 17 . 6/7/2011
phew caught up! that was power reading if ever i saw it! lol i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon BYE!
The Dark Knight's Revenge chapter 17 . 6/5/2011
That was really interesting, I liked the end :) Thanks for updating, please update again soon! ;D
Frogster chapter 17 . 6/5/2011
Wow! We really have waited a long time for this...

Poor Ben. To have his friend killed like that, in front of him, when he'd dragged his friend into the path of a bullet...no wonder he has nightmares. Of course we know he didn't mean to put him in the path of a bullet, and that Ben could just as easily have been the one killed, but those are empty words for someone suffering from PTSD. I'm glad you're exploring this, there must have been many soldiers during all wars who were affected this way; their stories were just never told.

Aww, love the Felicity/Ben. So sweet.

Update soon!
Dian chapter 17 . 6/5/2011
AMAZING! Thats all I can say! I loved it and I cant wait for the next chapter! Ohhhhh so interesting, and very Educational! Your writing is amazing and. Would love to be able to write the way you do, your writing takes me where they are and I can picture ut because you describe everythings so well!
DemiFan7 chapter 17 . 6/4/2011
Please please please please please update? Like, now? Haha no pressure! I literally cried while reading this chapter and am addicted to this story! You just might be the next Jane Austin :)
hpswst101 chapter 17 . 6/4/2011
Scary, especially when you think that soldiers still have tales like that nowadays. Tales of seeing their friends die right in front of them, or because of them. But the ending was sweet, and that's what counts. Update soon!

hpswst101
felicityphoenix chapter 17 . 6/4/2011
Whew! That's some mighty fine story-telling, writer! Something horrible has happend to Ben, but how will they get past it? That is the effect of good writing: Reader impatience. I have the patience of a gnat. I'm glad you're okay and writing again, you have been VERY missed!:D
Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 16 . 5/21/2011
:) I don't even know how to describe how much I loved that chapter! :))))
Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 15 . 5/21/2011
Very sweet fluff momement!
Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 14 . 5/21/2011
This is getting VERY interesting! :)
Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 13 . 5/21/2011
GREAT! Nut it always is! :D :)
Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 12 . 5/21/2011
L-O-V-E-D IT!
Muggle-Born Gleek chapter 11 . 5/21/2011
Awwww... I wish she could have just told him how she really felt about him. THen they would both know how they feel aobut each other!
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