Reviews for Try to Find My Place
Ally's Angel's chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
love it!
ChMax chapter 1 . 7/26/2010

I'm here to ask for your permission, because

I would like to translate this story

into Hungarian and publish it on .hu/merengo.

I hope you like the idea.

(If you're interested, please answer here

so that the Hungarian admins can check if I am

allowed to translate or not.)

Best regards,

PhoenixRe chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
"too cool to be Jacob's but not warm enough to be Edward's"

shouldn't it be "not cold enough" as Ed is a vampire and he is Time Lord (colder than average human but warmer than a vampire)

Nice little story. Like where it goes. Perhaps a two broken people helping each other thing...
Wonderbee31 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Sorry I took so long to review this, but it was an interesting cross here, just not a big fan of Twilight, but you managed to pull off an interesting moment with the Doc and Bella there, and will be looking at the sequel right now.
DiscoLemonadeDiva chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
I'm absolutely loving this! I can't wait to read the other one-shots in this series/see where you take this idea... Since it is one of the most realistic, well written, Twilight/Doctor Who crossovers that I have ever read... Ever. PPMS! :D
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Soului chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I would love to see her meet Torchwood, or Martha, one of the other companions anyway. Either that or a oneshot set after she returns. One of my main issues with Twilight is that Bella seems awfully immature. I would love to see the more confident, grown up Bella that returns. Maybe she decides to stay with the Doctor after a while and she asks him to bring her to the Cullens so she can say goodbye one last time?
JustAnotherMember chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Very good beginning. Looking at your note at the end about Bella meeting Edward as a human, I think you should make her be the one to convince Carlisle to change him. I dunno, just my thought. Haha. Update again soon!
PurpleMaeve chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Love it! :)
MissLizziebeth chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
I want her to meet Jasper when he was a human :] I think that would be cool. Maybe even the other Cullen's as humans but Carlisle as a vampire (coz he has god control and is a cool vamp :P). I kinda want Bella and the Doctor to get together but I don't mind. Keep writing xxx
GabzR chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
please do more cant wait
Lt. Cmdr. Radner chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
OMG that was great! I'm not a Twilight fan but this perhaps showed the Doctor doing what he does best. Meddling in seemingly small things that end up with big changes. I got to say that this has the potential for greatness and I want to see more of it. Like perhaps seeing the Doctor Who version of Vampires or perhaps hearing his explination on the Cullens or Jacob and the Werewolves. The possibilities are endless and I can't wait to get more of it.

And I love how Bella said "Anywhere but here...Anywhere but Forks... Just... Everywhere" best line in a story ever!

Looking forward to the next one.

Until next time True Believer... ALONS Y and DISMISSED
OrionTheHunter chapter 1 . 6/9/2010

I admit that when I finally tried to watch Twilight a couple week ago, I just couldn't get into the movie. That said, I'm not afraid to read a crossover with it, and this was quite enjoyable.

This has been marked complete, but I would like to say that should inspiration strike you to write more in this universe, I certainly would not object to reading it.

Anyway, thank you for writing and for sharing it with us.
Isis the Sphinx chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Oh, THIS is different. I tend to avoid Twilight stories as a whole because the quality usually isn't that good...but this caught my attention and I was willing to give it a try. Oh, nicely done. Looking forward to more!

I want to see the Doctor's reaction when he learns that Bella is a COMPLETE klutz. And tends to fall over more than run anywhere...

Keep writing!
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